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Dawn Rising

Dawn Rising At break of dawn, we rise from our bed. Are we too late to see? The morning light, Another sunrise. "Will you watch it with me?" He takes my hand, Then he smiles and says, "Where would I rather be?" Together we watch the sun's rebirth. Can love be born anew?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/26/2015 5:15:00 PM
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Lovely sunrise thoughts and questions, Lin. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 5:21:00 PM
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Hi, Sandra...thank you so very much. ~ Lin ~
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Viv Wigley
Date: 10/26/2015 1:17:00 AM
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You can't beat a good sunrise, with someone else. Lovely piece, Lin, well done. Viv
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 1:52:00 AM
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Thanks for the compliment, Viv. It's nice to get a visit from you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/25/2015 5:25:00 PM
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this is very nice. Congrats. I see you rhymed yours too!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 5:30:00 PM
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Thanks. It's been a habit that I really am trying to break.. although in this one I really should've continued the rhyme in the last line.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2015 3:30:00 PM
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this is charming Lin congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 3:40:00 PM
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Thank you, ma'am.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2015 1:25:00 PM
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A lovely poem, congrats.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 1:29:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Richard. I enjoyed writing for your contest.
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/25/2015 12:27:00 PM
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Lin a well deserved win!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 12:32:00 PM
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Thank you, Michael. How kind of you to acknowledge me. ;)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/19/2015 10:43:00 AM
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The sun rises when we hold the hand of the one we love, dear Lin! Wonderful, romantic writing! Very well done! A seven!
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/19/2015 10:56:00 AM
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I recall many romantic sun rises ~ grateful that we can hold on to good memories. You're very kind with your number...Thank you very much.

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