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Below is the poem entitled DAVIDS FOR DAVID which was written by poet Cyndi MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The melody can not be denied, pulled

from dreams and a lifetime of heartbeats.

First, come long notes that the piano mulls

while fingers linger. He returns to his sheets.

The tune reveals itself in black on white,

echoing warm ivories. A full moon prowls

several clouds that seem to skirt its light, 

like words that evade him. So, he scowls

at the window, takes the stillness inside

then sighs as everything falls into place.

There it is. The chorus no longer hides.

David knows the night, how it encases
a song. Lines love keys, those ebonies,

for the dark unlocks perfect symphonies. 

*David, I know you prefer the new minimalist sonnets, something which you showed us and I do plan to explore those as well. Thank you for what you bring to Soup. 

Thinking of you and the Mrs! Blessings sent to both of you!

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:30:00 AM
    Thank you for sponsoring the "David's for David" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
    He's my favourite! I watched his concert here (BKK)with our own Charise Pempengco. This is a very lovely dedication my dear Cyndi and I love it! CONGRATULATIONS FOR A SUPER WIN AND FOR THE CONTEST! LOVE, LEONORA

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Cyndi , well done xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 4:04:00 PM
    . love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 4:50:00 AM
    I love the way you have used enjambment to let the poem flow, without interruption from the rhymes of the sonnet format. Wishing you a lovely weekend. Love, Su