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Darkling In Distress

"Darkling in Distress" Spirits of ancient entities prowl hauntingly through eerie mist encumbered by flesh no more beyond sweet breath of lovers kiss as skeletons of eras past evaporated vapors wandering through tunnels concealed by lace drapes of sorrow. in clandestine atmosphere horror of hollow empty shells dark corridors impune as essence of torturous bones consume an imprisoned heart of a darkling in distress. kidnapped in a vacant enclosure of constrained emotions sequestered in quicksand down in a dark dungeon of a Life broken a crushed pedestal a crumpled effigy spewing volcanic ash from a verbotin sham sad spirit departs to wanderlust of withered dust parched and perished by pain black memories scream ... scream ... down in the dark dungeon thoughts tantalize: Life is only a vapor, a mist and Death is the beginning of Life. *darkling - an entity in pain *verbotin - forbidden *For Nathan's Insanity of Death Contest ..

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:43:00 AM
Words from heaven we miss you. love phyl
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:05:00 AM
you will always be amazing...SKAT
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Date: 8/11/2012 7:56:00 AM
WON 5th place ... thankxxx..
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Date: 8/10/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations, Linda-Marie, on a well deserved win.
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nathan's "Insanity Or Death" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:57:00 AM
congrats on your win Linda
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Date: 8/10/2012 2:49:00 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, very good write...David
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:21:00 PM
Linda,,, my bfff.... , a big congratulations in Nate's contest... his winners always seem to amaze.. i know how picky he is.... glad to see you here...pd
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:16:00 PM
wow, LInda, here is one of yours I missed. YOu set an excellent "dark" tone in it. Love how you used that word Darkling. Big congrats and I sure hope you are doing ok lately??
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:07:00 PM
congrats. Nate'
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:12:00 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's contest, " Down In The Dar Dungeon ". I believe you deserved a higher rating on this excellent poem. I have enjoyed reading it...and even though it's a dark poem, it exudes mystery and suspense. Thanks for your comment this morning. I am doing well and I hope you are too. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 7/22/2012 7:52:00 AM
WON 8th place ... thankxxx ...
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:52:00 PM
love this wonderfully dark piece, my friend - sure to be a big winner. I see you've got another contest - I must put my thinking cap on, lol
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Date: 7/14/2012 7:06:00 PM
nice write Linda....love Joseph
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Date: 7/14/2012 11:27:00 AM
The best to you in Debbie's contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2012 9:23:00 AM
Great write, friend, best to you! Jag
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Date: 7/14/2012 12:51:00 AM
cool poem love the darkness good luck in contest
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Date: 7/13/2012 6:03:00 PM
Your work is always escalating to new heights of beautiful poetry. Love to be reading my Jersey Girl this Friday night. Love n long hugs and a kiss on the cheek to you. Michael
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Date: 7/13/2012 5:04:00 PM
This is a fabulous interpretation Linda-Marie! I thoroughly enjoyed this incredible dark write! You sure kept me engrossed into your poem all throughout! Awesome write my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/13/2012 4:47:00 PM
my version and interpretation of contest theme .. enjoy poets with luv.. thankxx for all well wishes too.. happy weekend ..luv..
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