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Dancing the Unicorn

Where fancy's flowers bloom, I go, and music starts to play. And when sweet words of beauty flow, I dip and and weave and sway. . . Then comes a white horse, my delight, so I'll not be forlorn. In step with him, I freely write. I dance the unicorn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/10/2016 8:56:00 AM
Andrea, this poem is lovely! How absolutely beautiful! "Some day.... I'll find that magic unicorn"! ...Fran
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, old friend. I went way back for this one and found that you have always been first rate with your poetry. I can't seem to get any inspiration these days and rather than write poor stuff I'll be satisfied with commenting for a while. Love, daver
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:26:00 PM
Just stopping by to say 'Hi'
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Date: 5/21/2012 5:26:00 PM
I don't think i asked for names.... if that is the reason you will not enter... that is your choice... i don't mind.... you can do what every other poet did... just entered my contest... anyways...thanks for letting me know why, you can't enter my contest...xox...pd...I'm waiting for the contest to close tonight..hopefully,,, that way i can post all the missing contest... The "SHH Contest" and the Pooping contest" & long poem" contest. By the looks of it, it might close in a bit.. always pd
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Date: 4/22/2012 6:00:00 AM
Interesting title, Andrea, followed up by your usual flare of words and ideas.:) Beautiful visions to start the day with. Oh, thank you! Have always loved the unicorn, an unbeliever had said that the remains found had been that of a narwhale. I think that he'd lucked out on creativity and imagination.:) You "dance the unicorn" beautifully here. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:07:00 AM
Wonderful unicorn. Loved always bl and thanks for reading my write. bl
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Date: 4/10/2012 1:47:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your win! This is such a lovely write. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:16:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2012 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea!Loved it!!
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Date: 4/7/2012 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andie. This was light and lovely!
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Date: 4/7/2012 9:08:00 AM
congrats Andrea on a super win for this terrific write luv.. Brian chose some great poems for his winners list.. this is fabulous.. luv..
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:24:00 PM
Is the unicorn a new dance step? Or are you using the image as a metaphor for imagination? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/5/2012 8:34:00 PM
YOu are very perceptive, Matt it is a metaphor for imagination and also the title of one of my chapbooks I have for sell at Shadowpoetry)
Date: 4/5/2012 8:14:00 PM
ha ha..I'm just gonna say one thing... ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES~~ love it love it..always.. your little PD...
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:32:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..It has great poetic quality with excellent flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Thanks for stopping by..Your encouraging comments always lift my spirits..Sara
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Date: 4/5/2012 1:40:00 PM
this sounds like it's already a famous poem. it just flows so magically - i love it!
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Date: 4/5/2012 1:26:00 PM
Nice fanciful write Andrea. love phyl soup mail
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Date: 4/5/2012 12:09:00 PM
Love this fantasy dance. Children would love it too. Just the kid coming out in you, Andrea. Much Love, daver
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Date: 4/5/2012 11:49:00 AM
unicorns are so horny.
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Date: 4/5/2012 11:23:00 AM
I really like this piece Andrea,, haven't read a better one for a while, its music and writing entwined theme really appeals to me..)
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:33:00 AM
very lovely and light hearted.. good luck if for a contest Andrea.. am trying to judge mine if I can stay logged in long enough.. maybe hitch a ride on this sweet unicorn ?? anythinbg would help..oh..
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:32:00 AM
very lovely and light hearted.. good luck if for a contest Andrea.. am trying to judge mine if I can stay logged in long enough.. maybe hitch a ride on this sweet unicorn ?? anythinbg would help..oh..
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:21:00 AM
love this sweet piece, andrea. many congrats on all your wins and the new baby too
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:02:00 AM
Very pleasant write Andrea.It refreshes the mind.Love the flow here.
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Date: 4/5/2012 9:38:00 AM
So light-hearted and whimsical. Makes we want to dance. A lovely write, Andrea. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/5/2012 9:14:00 AM
Just beautiful. You seem to write so smoothly and easily. I love to read your poems.
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