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Sue jived to tremendous applause Then pondered what could be the cause She’d got dressed in a rush So her cute peachy tush Revealed she'd not put on her drawers!! 12~21~16

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Arlene Smith

Date: 1/2/2017 9:30:00 AM

So Ummmm their dancing in the moonlight.. ;-) Too funny Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2017 3:56:00 PM

ha ha ha great comment Arlene! Happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/23/2016 9:03:00 PM

I always miss the good shows!!! :) SO cute!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/24/2016 6:56:00 AM

ha ha ha looks like everything was on show that night lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 12/23/2016 2:13:00 PM

LMAO - thanks for the laughs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2016 4:35:00 PM

Thanks for all your support Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/22/2016 11:46:00 PM

I guess she was dancing cheek to cheek...:-) .. Nice limerick Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2016 12:00:00 AM

That comment is hilari'arse' Joseph!!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2016 8:43:00 PM

Awesome, Jan. You have become a master at them. REmember when you could not even figure out the meter a long time ago?

Jan Allison
Date: 12/23/2016 12:00:00 AM

I've come a long way since i wrote my first poem on 26th November 2013:-) Have learned so much from wonderful poets like YOU:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 12/22/2016 1:29:00 PM

Wish I had written this Jan. So good.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 6:23:00 PM

My mum's name is Barbara ... I told her tomorrow she is going to be a windy old bag lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 12/22/2016 5:43:00 PM

Hurricane Barbara...I heard. We will just have to batten down the hatches Jan. Merry Xmas.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:32:00 PM

aww Jean you are too kind - I do worry about my muse - hubby and I were on a walk and lines 1 2 and 5 came to me so i had to get a till receipt and scribble it down before it disappeared from my mind... wont be walking next few days the forecast is dire!:-( hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/22/2016 5:24:00 AM

She deserved the applause dear, Jan! Haha! I am smiling thinking of ... Excellent!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Demetrios and Happy Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/21/2016 8:26:00 PM

Lol, talk about a draft! Funny stuff Jan!:)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Cheryl:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/21/2016 6:14:00 PM

you are too funny, jan! this one is a gem!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:06:00 PM

aww thanks Ilene I do enjoy writing humourous poems:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/21/2016 2:53:00 PM

hilarious Jan love it hugs merry Christmas hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:06:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed Shadow:-) have a wonderful Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/21/2016 2:12:00 PM

Ha! Cheers, Jan. Those were the days... : )

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:07:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 12/21/2016 12:11:00 PM

Oops...poor Sue

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:07:00 PM

LOL:-)thanks Tim :-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/21/2016 9:41:00 AM

Must have been some dance:) Merry Christmas Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:07:00 PM

I wonder if it's ever happened Daniel lol:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 12/21/2016 9:30:00 AM

Ha, this was cute and funny Jan. She spun on the floor with such flair As we stood helpless only to stare Then her skirt moved above And each man fell in love For what she’d forgotten to wear :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:08:00 PM

ha ha great reply Chris:-) have a wonderful time over the festive period:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/21/2016 9:29:00 AM

Ha, Jan. I see your sense of humor is alive and well.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:09:00 PM

ohhhhh Lin welcome back have missed you!!! I am still trying with the humour:-) hugs jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/21/2016 9:11:00 AM

What she forgot will never be forgotten! O U silly girl U;-). Huggabugs! ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 12/22/2016 1:09:00 PM

ha ha ha great comment John:-) Happy Christmas:-) hugs jan xx