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Dance of the Seasons

Dance me through the springtime To the sound of a twelve string guitar; Dance me through the terror When I don't know where you are. Dance me through the summer With red roses in your hair; Take me through the wind and storm Plant your kisses everywhere. Dance me through the autumn Let your body touch my mind; You are my only lover And I see you though I'm blind. Dance me through the winter When both of us will cry; And your eyes are filled with sorrow When we both must say goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/31/2013 10:22:00 AM
wonderful write Elizabeth... enjoyed...
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Date: 4/29/2012 5:20:00 PM
Bittersweet, and utterly charming... again, the structure is impeccable - rhyme, flow and sentiment. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/23/2012 3:37:00 PM
Your verses dance off the screen into my own mind, again a finely piece of crafted art.
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Date: 12/21/2011 8:10:00 PM
wow, another amazing one, Elizabeth. I love this kind of theme and so lyrical!
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Date: 12/13/2011 9:32:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem! An you make it all feel so easy when it flows from your pen. brilliant!
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Date: 12/5/2011 8:07:00 PM
Wow you make me wish I was your man, you do. Love it
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:53:00 AM
A happy poem with a sad closing... Aww... You really did make me sad over your last 3 lines..
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Date: 12/4/2011 8:27:00 AM
What a lovely and touching poem Liz, a poet after my own heart for sure. I finally posted my picture, whatcha think?
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Date: 12/3/2011 5:40:00 PM
you are brilliant,,,but then all your poems are,,,touching,,,inspiring,,,and full of love.......thanks for all you do,,,what a masterpiece................
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Date: 12/3/2011 1:12:00 PM
Hello Lizzie..a deeply plaintive write & as i experience it..touching...!
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Date: 12/3/2011 8:30:00 AM
Elizabeth, a delightful, original, airy work of art, nice again! jimbo
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Date: 12/2/2011 11:22:00 PM
This is another sad write from you, Elizabeth but has a bittersweet tone to it-- I hope you are doing ok...:)
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Date: 12/2/2011 9:44:00 PM
Liz, hope all is well..always,..p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:25:00 PM
Dance of The Seasons, what an apt title! your imagery is simply poetic.
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Date: 12/2/2011 3:49:00 PM
This sings, Liz. As a musician, I like the rhythm and the flow. Love, daver
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Date: 12/2/2011 2:55:00 PM
What a beautiful, tender, but sad piece, Elizabeth. Excellent writing, as usual
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:29:00 AM
You're truly gifted, dear Elizabeth. Yet another masterpiece from you. Keep it up. Tell me, have you heard from Terry Martin lately???
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Date: 12/2/2011 8:41:00 AM
Love the way you have life dancing thru the seasons. A unique write and lovely words. phyl
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:41:00 AM
This a gem elizabeth, such a wonderful poem, excellent. harry
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Date: 12/2/2011 7:31:00 AM
You have written so wonderfully of dance in every spheres of life up to end. Nice, thanks for this one, my friend. bl
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Date: 12/1/2011 4:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very romantic and passionate work..I am glad that I chose it to read tonight..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 12/1/2011 2:42:00 PM
If parting is such sweet sorrow, your words bridge the gap.........George
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Date: 12/1/2011 1:25:00 PM
I don't know why you say your worried that your muse is drying up. This sure says otherwise. Sorry, no rhyme this time. Oh, whatta know!
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Date: 12/1/2011 11:43:00 AM
a very beautiful piece my dear.....
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Date: 12/1/2011 10:55:00 AM
jimminie, lizzie... i am heady all the way with this danec for all seasons.. a lovely flow that simply mesmerizes even when the dance of farewell stoops and says goodbye... wow!.. :) huggs!
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