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Damn You, Adam

Adam’s Garden yeilds a tree Grown from the roots of Hell Rare Forbidden fragrant fruit On golden branches; Rapture fell But Adam stepped one fig away From Satan’s dying Curse This world remained a Paradise And Eve escaped the pain of birth! No ghastly storms for Noah With Arc afloat in driven rains No frantic fear of drowning Forty nights and some odd days Cain would not slay Abel No Tower found in Babel Seeds of Life were never planted Generations never born No Sins in need of repentance Nor Judgment days in Heaven To receive their final sentence The highest price was paid For Adam's abstinence
Contest - Reinvent, Reimagine, Revamp by Just That Archaic Poet Inspired by his poem - Damn You, Eve

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Date: 3/18/2016 2:59:00 PM
A thought provoker here Karen, well done on the win..'
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Date: 4/14/2015 8:01:00 PM
An excellent write and win! Hugs
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Date: 7/22/2014 7:16:00 AM
You've written the whole tale beautifully Karen..I know this all,I've read it as i'm a Muslim..very well done my dear Friend! Have a good day! :)
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Saba Khan
Date: 7/22/2014 7:18:00 AM
I'm sorry but I didn't like the title :(
Date: 4/20/2014 3:43:00 PM
I guessed it was about this Adam! A very beautiful poem loved it!!
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 4/20/2014 10:18:00 PM
I appreciate your kind remarks. Thank you !
Date: 2/1/2014 11:24:00 AM
I have to see his now.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 2/1/2014 12:02:00 PM
I really liked his version of Eve; I took the opposite point of view :)
Date: 1/31/2014 6:41:00 AM
The title drew me in . The poem captured my mind . Your talent made me a fan. Thank you.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 1/31/2014 11:10:00 AM
Thank you for the comment and compliment :)
Date: 1/1/2014 9:03:00 PM
A well penned poem, deserving of it's accolades. Well done, and may 2014 see many more.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 1/1/2014 9:04:00 PM
scott, appreciate the kind remarks. Looking forward to a great 2014 :)
Date: 12/29/2013 8:22:00 PM
Karen- thank you for your welcome. I am new to this site and I haven't written a poem in decades. I am coming out of my writing closet, only to find that there are warm and friendly and encouraging people like yourself. I loved this poem..IF ONLY..yet I feel paradise right now...still.......barbara
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/29/2013 11:26:00 PM
Barbara, I hope to see more of your work. I very much enjoyed your first poem! Thank you for commenting ...Happy New Year :)
Date: 12/24/2013 1:24:00 AM
Karen, , Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/24/2013 3:02:00 PM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year :)
Date: 12/19/2013 1:22:00 PM
Very well written and an entertaining poem to read. Love the flow and the message. Always, Laura
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/19/2013 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Laura, always appreciate your sweet comments :)
Date: 12/16/2013 10:18:00 PM
Interesting satire...very well written
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/17/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment. :)
Date: 12/9/2013 8:48:00 PM
I think Eve is the be-damned because she ate of the apple first. Regardless we are born sinners, forgiven by the blood of Christ. This is a most unusual poem, but written with class. You are and outstanding poet and this poem proves it. Good Job.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/10/2013 10:15:00 AM
Lynn, will we ever really know ? Thank you very much for your perspective :)
Date: 12/3/2013 10:05:00 AM
Love the title...haha. I think it's awesome!
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment!
Date: 11/28/2013 1:06:00 PM
Great pin flowing with gold ink Karen!
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 12/3/2013 3:52:00 PM
I appreciate your nice comment. Have a great day :)
Date: 11/21/2013 12:30:00 AM
Geez, I'm blown over by your rhythmic style, not to mention your wit. I see you bagged the top prize with this gem. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/21/2013 8:51:00 AM
Licia, thank you very much for the great comment :)
Date: 11/20/2013 12:04:00 PM
A well-deserved win; you blew the rest of the competition out of the water with this piece. Thanks for participating, K <3
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/20/2013 12:06:00 PM
Amazing inspiration from an amazing poet :)
Date: 11/13/2013 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win Karen! Awesome! Love, Annalise
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/20/2013 12:06:00 PM
Annalise, thank you for commenting :)
Date: 11/13/2013 3:16:00 AM
Hello Karen ! Congrats on your fine and deserving win ! : ))) ..... <3 Saanvi :p
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/13/2013 8:31:00 AM
Saanvi, thank you :)
Date: 11/12/2013 11:27:00 PM
AHA. you got FIRST place. Magnificent, sweetie!! Congratulations.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 11:43:00 PM
Honored to be in your league. Loved your entry. Thanks a bunch :)
Date: 11/12/2013 9:13:00 PM
The fate of man in Adam's hands.... I love how this is written. Congrats, Karen!
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 10:14:00 PM
Juliet, I appreciate your kindness :)
Date: 11/12/2013 7:35:00 PM
i loved this when i first read it and knew it would do well in the contest...you penned an excellent piece my friend and got a very deserving placement! Congrats on your big win :) hugs
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 7:50:00 PM
Sandra, thank you so much for the glowing review. I love your writing and inspiration :)
Date: 11/12/2013 7:24:00 PM
A very powerful poem, Karen! This was a well deserved first place win! Congratulations!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem! :)
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 7:49:00 PM
Hi Kelly, your awesome writing makes me feel a little pale sometimes. You rock and thank you :)
Date: 11/12/2013 3:55:00 PM
I hoped this was going to be a winner. Way to go in the contest.
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 3:59:00 PM
David, thank you very much :)
Date: 11/12/2013 12:42:00 PM
Karen, congrats on a creative and clever write! I want you in my corner on judgement day! Hugs
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 12:44:00 PM
Hi Cecilia, thank you very much, but I probably won't be much help on judgment day ...ha ha
Date: 11/12/2013 10:46:00 AM
congrats on a great win Karen
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/12/2013 10:47:00 AM
Thank you for the acknowledgement :)
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