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Daily Strife

Within our personal trials we LET Darkness reside for we are NOT Perfect by no means in YOUR Sight but we will open our HEART To overcome our burden and BE Lifted up and no longer TROUBLED John 14:1 A try at HG and Dane Ann's new form of poetry.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2011 1:22:00 AM

I remember when they introduced this form, Phyllis. You did really well with it here.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/16/2010 5:59:00 AM

I hope you are having a wonderful day Phyllis. To me it is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Today I want to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I truly appreciate you taking the time to comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/22/2010 3:17:00 PM

PERFECT!!! great end line! and it's biblical. has to go to my favs. JOHN HENRY LOVING III

Simone Segal

Date: 3/28/2010 9:29:00 AM

Another woderful write, love Simone

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/19/2010 4:47:00 PM

Dear PhyllisCongratulations This is a Masterfully Done "End Line Word" POEM I do hope YOU have entered it in Dane Ann's Contest THANK-YOU for Your Support in DANE and My new Form of POETRY If this is only a "try" in this form I can't wait for YOUR "End Line Word" POEM once YOU feel confident I await YOUR next POEM in this Form Superb Write You have captured the Concept of this Form Encore My Dear LOVE YOU ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/17/2010 5:08:00 PM

Awesome end-line poem, Phyllis. A very good message; none of us is perfect so we must be open to enlightenment. Excellent entry -- good luck in Dane Ann's contest. I think she'll really like this one! Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 2/17/2010 10:15:00 AM

well done

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/16/2010 11:55:00 AM

This is a fun form to write... I added the acrostic for extra difficulty.....:JP]