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Cupid's Arrows

Cupid, God of immortal love, Thy sharpest arrows for me Prepare For Thy archery, on my aching heart To practice, Be accurate, I THEE, Implore Because I will die at once, If THEE miss The TARGET! ©Demetrios Trifiatis 20 NOVEMBER 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/24/2014 5:08:00 PM

truly excellent piece demetrios love the picture it drew for me

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/25/2014 5:23:00 AM

Thank you, Liam, my friend for your visit. Glad that you liked the picture drawn!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/20/2014 5:43:00 PM

I do love Cupid and even write with Charmaine under the pen name "Cupids Arrow".....You hit the target here my friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Tim, for your precious comment! I ignored your collaboration with our friend, Charmaine! She is a wonderful lady!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/20/2014 10:50:00 AM

I will die at once, If THEE miss The TARGET! Hey it's a most unexpected line. Have you planted a miracle tree in your backyard ? you bet. This is called poetry. You have set a standard. God bless. You are a joy to me. Love XXXX RAJAT

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/21/2014 12:12:00 AM

Hey Demetrios you are so witty. Love XXXX RAJAT

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 6:06:00 PM

My dear friend, Rajat, thank you very much for your glorious comment! If there is a miracle tree in my backyard, certainly it is not myself that has planted it but THE ONE who has brought us here! Thank you for your love. God bless you my dear friend!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/20/2014 8:25:00 AM

I have always loved the idea of Cupid and his arrow. It's such a romantic tail. I love your poem Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 12:43:00 PM

Every romantic heart dreams of Cupid's arrows my friend , Brenda! Thank you for your visit and comment!

David Meade

Date: 11/20/2014 8:01:00 AM

Cupid hardly ever misses and with a heart as big as yours his arrow with pierce deep! Nicely done my big hearted friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 12:39:00 PM

Thank you my friend, David, for your heartfelt comment. You so generous!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2014 5:02:00 AM

- To love is to admire with the heart - To admire is to love with the mind - To live without love is not a real life - Touching and beautifully written my friend Demertios - I wish you a lovely day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 5:08:00 AM

Yes, admiration is a necessary ingredient of love and Yes life without love worth little! Thank you so much my good friend, Anne-Lise, for your visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2014 4:54:00 AM

Oh Demetrios - so so beautiful .. I adore this - into faves and a 7 from me

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/20/2014 5:01:00 AM

Oh my dear, Jan, you too pray for his arrows? Hope HE hears our prayers, Ha-ha! Thank you!