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The trip was a riot of color, It brings a myriad of queries, Fantastic tales of utter darkness, Views' visible roots were explored. Mainsail surges, pungent froth carried wave tips while, blast swings moaning openly. superb mountains, Convey streams into streaming rivers, Down slants shrouded in woods. And the majesty of the stars, Is confronted every morning, Under soft white clouds, is with each foot I set down. I relish the quiet of the sound, how each slant embraces, the still raw bay. Home to unglaciated cervids, Gnawing animals and polar bears, Willow grouse, deer, Also, the renowned Chinook Salmon. More genuine than the Arctic flow, Afar-off state refuted, In both word and deed, Anyhow of these ever tender wishes. Atop mottled strands, I let my emotions air dry, Orange tulips were selected, I regained faith; I can fly.
5Th Place Contest Winner Written: June 18, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mark Toney

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Date: 7/18/2022 8:42:00 PM
A beautiful depiction of Alaska and journey. Excellent my friend Laasad...
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Date: 7/15/2022 11:14:00 AM
Hello, I do not like cold weather. Born in New England and didn't move to the south (Texas and Kentucky) until I was old enough to live on my own. As I read this I could feel the cold, but your way of telling this story made me see life in a cold climate beautiful! Thank you.
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Date: 7/13/2022 2:05:00 PM
Awfully beautiful and colorful verse, Lasaad. Enjoyed reading and I see congratulations are in order. Hugs and Blessings friend
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Date: 6/22/2022 1:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight virtually and poetically over your muse as I wish for a cruise to Alaska... God bless you.
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Date: 6/20/2022 10:09:00 PM
You have taken us too into a riot of wonderful experiences. Congratulations on your great win dear friend....
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Date: 6/20/2022 9:39:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your beautiful vibrant imagery brings me to the center of this vivid scene. Your artistry is breathtaking. I was immersed in the majesty of this enthralling piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2022 11:59:00 AM
Greetings, Sotto Poet, Lasaad. This is my wife's and my dream trip, so it's a Fav poem for me. The wording and progression of your stanzas are so descriptive that I'm reading her a stanza every morning at breakfast so she can experience it as a serial (the combined stanzas each day up to the new stanza). At the last stanza the whole poem will be read. Thank you! Congratulations on your win on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 4 has already started!
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Date: 6/20/2022 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark. I appreciate every word of your comment and it means so much to me. Thank you for reading, placing, and commenting on my poem. I will be very grateful and will continue to participate in your wonderful contests.
Date: 6/20/2022 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Love It. I want your baby bear. Today, be blessed with your win...........
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Date: 6/20/2022 9:44:00 AM
5th place.... Congratulations
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Date: 6/19/2022 11:48:00 PM
I hope you had a wonderful time Lasaad, you took us there with your verse. Tom
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Date: 6/19/2022 2:34:00 PM
I wanted to go to Alaska, so thank you for taking me there via this poem. Write more poems about it.
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Date: 6/19/2022 9:16:00 AM
Lovely imagery of the great state with warmer winter and cooler summer.... ! An Alaskan cruise must have been a wonderful experience. You have beautifully captured the landscape of Alaska and its fauna.... ! Thoroughly enjoyed...!
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Date: 6/19/2022 4:35:00 AM
Thank God, there are still some pristine places on our planet and you, my friend, Lasaad, have painted in the most bright colors these places. Superbly written poem. Congratulations! Blessings.
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Date: 6/18/2022 3:25:00 PM
Hello Lassad, wow! An Alaskan cruse! It must have been a wonderful cruise that many people enjoyed. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/18/2022 2:33:00 PM
You took an Alaskan cruise? It sounds like it. That's the only way i'd go to that freezing cold place would be on a cruise!! Some very pleasing imagery in this poem, Lassad.
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Date: 6/18/2022 1:00:00 PM
You convey images that I pleasantly recall from memories. A lovely wonder of nature Alaska is-- on land or water. A FAVE from me for this heavenly gift you crafted my friend. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/18/2022 12:56:00 PM
Your Free verse is quite exquisite Lasaad This one flows so smooth just like a cruise ship, breathtaking natural imagery, your final stanza is so uplifting, cheers David
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Date: 6/18/2022 12:39:00 PM
Plenty of imagery is that wonderful state.
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