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The ghostly town unfolds in air
harmonic drapes - his soul's bestow;
aright reveals the bird's despair
the cold winds blow upon the crow.

The mind ascribes to open sails
inside the mists, upon the waves,
on broken strings the mode avails,
the emptiness of skyward graves.

The ghostly town records crow's wrong
and then invents dimensions yon,
beyond birds' step the feasts belong
stars' open Halls invite and conn.

Denounced immures - upon the slopes
distrait his hope - ascends effused
disporting fate Atropos gropes,
emending those who reigns refused.

The ghostly town torn scopes imbues
inside the air will play and glow,
with colored lights and hearths' red hues,
those dreams that cling in falling snow.

And how beyond the lone bird flies
stars are beclouded from the slopes
symbolic largess rains from skies,
and laughs the crow at his own scopes.

© 04-14-2013, G. V., All Rights Reserved
( Iambic tetrameter form.)

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  1. Date: 6/5/2014 12:24:00 PM
    Hi Giorgio: A beautifully worded verse that flows like a breeze. My compliments!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:40:00 PM
    Your work carries me to ....a great escape... Something soulful about crows I love 'the mind ascribes to open sails' Thanks for stopping by my page today. and keep on writing. Love, SuZ

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 11:02:00 AM
    You sure possess a rare literary skill. You seemingly write with the last drop of blood in your vein

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Great poem and welcome to the Lifetime Club. I enjoyed reading your work. thank you for sharing.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 4:11:00 AM
    You are an amazing poetic teller of tales in metaphoric style,fantastic.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 3:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your: LIFETIME Premium, Giorgio !!! And thank you for this wonderful poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)