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Curl around me, take a chance escape in this sweet romance, create a story with me . . . I want to live in your poetry The beginning is moving so slow and the middle lingers way too long, this ending I need to know - so please don’t let go never, ever let me go, because this is where I belong Wrapped in moments true, in the story of love- a beautiful mood, the rhythm and rhyme of you As these pages unfold- tenderly, thoughts of you hold me. . . softly Embrace me, and take a chance escape in this sweet romance, create a story with me I want to live in your poetry Because this is where I belong, and the wait has been too long This ending I need to know Will I be tangled in moments true, in the story of love- a beautiful mood, the rhythm and rhyme of you? I want to live in your poetry ______________________ ~ If loving you means living in your words ~ Authors Note - These lyrics are a reflection of the heart. I understand that need- of being someone’s beginning, middle and end. Never letting go. Friday December 13, 2019- Poem of the Day

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Tom Woody

Date: 9/20/2023 7:45:00 PM

I see this did very well for you. Not surprised. That line, "I want to live in your poetry" is certainly classic. Such sweet romance, as always. Create a story with me... nice

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/20/2023 7:57:00 PM

This lyric/poem was chosen as poem of the day, and that was an unexpected surprise, indeed. Thank you, Tom. There's something about that thought, that holds such a beautiful meaning. Living in your poetry, makes my heart smile. :) The story is created.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/14/2022 2:56:00 AM

Just taking time to read some of your older poems. This one is so dreamy and romantic. I could live in your poetry like this forever. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/14/2022 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, John. Such a sweet thing to say. It is possible to stay in my poetry, and you are welcome to do so, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Milvee Labajo

Date: 4/1/2021 5:56:00 AM

Beautiful and divine. “I want to live in your poetry” is literally what I feel like saying to you Brandy. I want to be the character of your story and be able to say these words to a lover. I am now officially a fan :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/1/2021 9:27:00 PM

Oh my ! I am in complete awe with your thoughts. You can see yourself as a character in my poem. I am blushing. Thank you, Milvee. I appreciate your kind words. :) Brandy

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/9/2021 11:42:00 AM

Beautiful romantic poem Brandy Nicole! Congrats on your lifetime membership.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 3/9/2021 10:27:00 AM

What a sweet write, Brandy. Yes, I too thrive on experiencing the middle with my husband. I don't worry about the future as long as each day when I wake... he's still there. So, keep on with this romantic poetry of yours, and God bless! It's beautiful.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2021 8:15:00 PM

Carol, thank you for this lovely comment. Such a wonderful feeling indeed, knowing the one you love is so close. Your kind words and compliments are greatly appreciated. I certainly will keep writing moments of romance. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/6/2020 6:17:00 PM

I'm probably sounding a bit redundant at this point, but I really do dig this shy attitude in your romance poetry. It feels so sincere. You say this is a lyric... the voice in my head that would suit these words... hmmm .... someone like Norah Jones perhaps. She has that beautiful shyness in her voice that is so alluring.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/6/2020 10:48:00 PM

I am blushing, with you saying you dig my shy attitude in my romantic poetry. I just write from the heart. Thank you Timothy. So kind of you to say that my words remind of Norah Jones. I appreciate the compliment. :) Brandy

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/30/2020 2:16:00 AM

This reminds me of the orignal seduction of Poetry Brandy...I knew you had style...J.A.B.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/30/2020 9:17:00 PM

Oh my!! Your thoughts make me blush. Thank you Justin. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. :) Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/6/2020 1:34:00 PM

Nicole this is an amazing write - I understand someone's beginning, middle and end - I am still experiencing this with a loving husband. Blessings, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/6/2020 7:23:00 PM

I am happy that you are experiencing this kind of love. Thank you Jennifer, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2019 10:38:00 AM

Wow, love it. Blessings for 2020!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/31/2019 2:30:00 PM

Thank you Richard!! I appreciate you and your thoughts. Many Wonderful blessings to you and yours. Happy New Year! :) Brandy

John Watt

Date: 12/26/2019 12:49:00 PM

Love your images of rhythm and rhyme and pages unfolding as a metaphor for a romance. "I want to live in your poetry" is a delicious line to repeat. Beautiful write. Hugs ~ John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/26/2019 8:44:00 PM

A "Delicious line" to repeat? Is that so? Thank you John. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 8:59:00 AM

looks like you are still creating a story.. hope you had a lovely day yesterday...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/26/2019 8:42:00 PM

Who me?! Perhaps.. Thank you Silent One. My day was wonderful yesterday. :) Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 8:12:00 AM

what superb lyrics Brandy I love the impact of the repeated phrase and I see it was voted potd - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/26/2019 8:42:00 PM

Thank you Jan, for your kind words and congratulations. I appreciate you. Many wonderful blessings my dear friend. :) Brandy

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 6:22:00 AM

Absolutely Beautiful, Brandy. Sorry I missed the POTD.. so Congratulations on that. Happy Holidays to you and your family.. Sending love.. Charlie

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/24/2019 9:15:00 PM

Awe, thank you Charlie. Such a wonderful comment. Thank you for your kind words and wishes. Congratulations as well. Happy Holidays to you and your family. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/22/2019 11:26:00 PM

Not surprised this got POTD was going to say it deserved it when I read it. Christmas blessings my friend and congratulations. Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/23/2019 7:18:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, so sweet of you to leave your kind words and congratulations upon this little scribble of mine. Happy Holidays to you as well. Many wonderful blessings. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/21/2019 3:42:00 PM

Congrats on the POTD Brandy, a fine write indeed fully deserving the award.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/21/2019 7:05:00 PM

Dear Gordon, thank you for your kind words and congratulations. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 12/19/2019 8:44:00 PM

Brandy your poem is beautiful and very deserving of POTD, well done!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/19/2019 10:31:00 PM

Constance, thank you for your lovely comment and congratulations. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/18/2019 7:48:00 AM

Living in the Words of YOU...Congratulations Brandy on POTD

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/18/2019 3:42:00 PM

"Living in My Words" Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Arturo, for your kind words and congratulations. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 12/15/2019 5:42:00 AM

To live in someone's poetry is a beautiful romantic gesture and im sure you live in a special person's poetry.... I like the refrain and the formatting.... A great choice for POTD.. Always love your poems my friend..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/15/2019 7:14:00 PM

It is an incredible feeling!! Thank you Silent One, for your lovely comment and congratulations. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

John Hamilton

Date: 12/14/2019 6:56:00 PM

This is one of your best for sure Brandy, congrats on POTD, and I'm putting this in my faves...you just keep getting better!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/14/2019 8:27:00 PM

John, you saying this is one of my best- leaves my heart smiling. Thank you. My words are from the heart. I am not getting better. I am just being me. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites. Seems Lyrics are growing on me. I have written a few. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2019 12:37:00 PM

Nicely done, emotions of the heart always well excepted.. send one over :) congratulations on well deserve POTD

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/14/2019 8:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve. My heart is in every word. Your thoughts are greatly appreciated. :) Brandy

Na Na

Date: 12/14/2019 5:12:00 AM

Congrats Brandy on POTD lately when I congratulate someone for potd it goes to who won the day before. I congratulated you earlier and it went under Curtis`s name.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/14/2019 8:16:00 PM

No worries. Sometimes that happens. :) Gremlins are in the soup. Thank you Gregory, for your kind words and congratulations. My best to you. :) Brandy