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Crayon Caresses

"Crayon Caresses" blue velvet sky caresses pink cotton candy clouds beneath a gold umbrella red heartbeats breathing loud. a yellow Sun kisses skin of silky bronze glowation footprints carve love in brown sand while white waves crest formation. green trees hide secret embrace while purple passion prowls viewing an orange sunset rose petals play on towels. silvery stars illuminate beach as amber heavens sleep magenta magic smiles so sweet chase black and grey to ocean's deep. ...crayola rainbow lovers' leap ...
*Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S. *For Tracie's Paint The World Contest ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2014 1:49:00 AM
lovely imagery.... RIP. ~Love you forever your little bff ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:00:00 AM
you sure painted this contest, but then you always do.. love this poem...........
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Date: 11/2/2012 3:16:00 PM
congrats on your poem being featured.. have a great day buddy cory
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Date: 11/2/2012 8:36:00 AM
Love the use of crayola in this poem. Congrats on it being featured. love phyl
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Date: 11/2/2012 5:00:00 AM
you color beautifully with your words...congrats on having this poem selected!
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Date: 10/30/2012 1:28:00 PM
Waxy and colorful. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/28/2012 10:39:00 PM
Your are one of the best poets I have ever read! And I've read poetry in many languages. In Latin,Greek,Spanish,French. You're up there with Homer and Ovid. I think you should write an entire book/story using poetry like the Iliad or the metamorphoses. :) You're my idea of the ideal poet.
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Date: 10/28/2012 10:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Linda-Marie on your poetry being featured this week. It is as lovely as a rainbow...describing lovers' emotions so lovingly and deeply. Sandy is getting closer to New York's shores. Thousands of people have been evacuated. I hope you are safe with your family. Have a blessed day. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:23:00 PM
Linda-Marie, A belated congrats on your colorful win! I love the vivid beach scene you painted! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/27/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Paint The World" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2012 12:35:00 PM
My big congratulations, Linda-Marie on your winning entry in Tracie's contest, " Paint The World Contest ". It's every poet's dream to paint such a lovely scenery of the fading sunset....and you have painted it grandiosely with your colorful crayons! How's Eric doing? Please send him my regards. Thank you for your comments. Best wishes and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 7/27/2012 9:18:00 AM
I feel the Crayon between my fingers, and want to express such beauty, if only I could.
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Date: 7/26/2012 8:46:00 PM
nice...
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:45:00 PM
A beautiful, descriptive write, Linda-Marie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/26/2012 2:41:00 PM
Glad to read all your new verses. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/26/2012 10:30:00 AM
congrats on your win Linda
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on your colourful win 'Sweetheart' :) love ya, deb...hope your day is good and you are feeling better...
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:11:00 AM
WON 5th place.. thankxxx..
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Date: 7/26/2012 7:42:00 AM
Great job,wonderful imagery,Linda.Congratulations on your superb win...
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:40:00 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win, very good picture you paint..David
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Date: 7/26/2012 3:16:00 AM
Beautiful Linda Marie, congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:17:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem dearest Linda which deserves a favourite... Hope you had a lovely birthday... the best you can... and im sorry yes for Ron's loss my dear.. Always in my prayers... Hugs Charma(i ll get back to read more later~)
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Date: 5/23/2012 1:51:00 PM
My deepest belated sympathy to you BOTH on the loss of dad. So sad. hugs phyl
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:35:00 AM
Happy bday sorry for rons loss. And glad your still here with your creative poetry.
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:29:00 AM
Rose petals play on clouds----wow weee! Great lingo, Linda Marie! It is outstanding what you've done with the rainbow! Thoroughly enjoyed this one! love, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:29:00 AM
towels...
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