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Country Stream

COUNTRY STREAM Gentle flow and sky blue With a thatch hut reflected See a multitude of ducks And they as good as proprietors Oh the simple wash of it all Lazy carefree movement A country pair stand down stream Content apparently to do nothing I would not disturb My pounding heart though goes where the stream makes its turn Where it narrows darkens fades Where it finds downhill and goes wild! Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 2:43:00 PM
Some wild water writing from your trusty pen I see Daver..' good images for me in this excellent piece of country..'
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Date: 8/6/2015 6:39:00 PM
OH WOWOWOW, This one is incredible. My favorite of the recent ones you have been showing us. it's amazing, how YOU want to go to the wild side!! fave!
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Date: 8/6/2015 1:02:00 PM
You describe a country stream well in this poem and then comes the rapid and goes wild. Feels peaceful to watch a country stream running along. Nicely done. love phyl
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