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Cool Withdrawal From Love

Cool withdrawal from love Do not think that I love you less Than when at your mercy I lay But to forestall the sad distress Of forlorn love, I keep away. Pipe dreaming for everything Which I have known to be your traits Your image to my fancy bring And makes my age-old wounds to spate But I do swear, and never must, Your self-dispelled man, trouble you In case I break, you may distrust The oath I took to love you, too. I have withdrawn myself from love To make both of us safe, my dove. +++ September 25, 2014 Form: Sonnet (tetrameter) Dr.Ram Mehta Eighth Place Win Contest: Structured Verse by Giorgio V.

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Date: 10/3/2014 6:13:00 PM
I'm coming back to read this one, once again. It was nice to see your poem on the winner's list, Dr. Ram. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 9/30/2014 11:54:00 AM
Beautifully penned Dr Mehta many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2014 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram. So sad, yet profound and well written. Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:39:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:18:00 AM
Congrats on this sonnet that feels a little sad. The emotion in the words touches one. Well done
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Date: 9/26/2014 2:50:00 PM
So honest...good luck with the contest.
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Date: 9/26/2014 7:30:00 AM
Dr. Ram A sadly passionate write that shows if you care about someone, sometimes you have to let them go to protect them from hurt. Thank you for the nice comment on my Two's Of Love poem
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Date: 9/26/2014 12:14:00 AM
I think it is better to walk away from love than to continue in a relationship that will end in heartbreak.... A very well written sonnet, Dr. Ram. Good luck in Giorgio's contest!
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:39:00 PM
Withdrawal warm and beautiful! thank you again for your nice comment to my last poem, appreciated
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Date: 9/25/2014 5:02:00 PM
very beautifully penned ram excellent piece
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:50:00 AM
Very nice entry Ram. Light & Love
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:44:00 AM
Cool withdrawal, hot Sonnet though, Dr. Ram! An exceptionally well-constructed verse with profound overtones that capture the imagination! Good luck, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:27:00 AM
Wow an amazing one Dr Ram! I hv no clue as to what to write till now! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:09:00 AM
Ahh!! This one has such a romantic feel to it..Great contest entry..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2014 7:42:00 AM
Very beautiful Dr. Mehta. I love the last two lines so much.
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