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a mere fledgling of twelve, with dreamy eyes,                                               I participated in a contest,                       revealing my utopian resolutions for the New Year....                                    if I won a million dollar lottery,                                        how would I spend the money!                            what an extraordinary frenzy it created...                                                when there was a huge furor                                                       with a handsome prize, writing -                          I would fund a hospital for the underprivileged .                         many years passed by, never got a lottery,                    never had the chance of funding a hospital for the needy,                                   or a Girls’ School, which was my other goal…                                     but I became a Teacher, chose to                                  teach underprivileged children who needed support.                                  for the next few years of my life,                      my resolutions are centred on the unfulfilled passions,                  which remained hushed inside the crimson petals of my heart,                                            never spoken aloud, never achieved  …                                 at the tranquil dusk of my life, which I embrace as                      the perfect time…cooing birds from the hills announce                                                 with their mellifluous songs,                                          reverberating the mountaintops... now is the opportunity,                               to use those blessings I was endowed with..                                   inherited from grandparents and parents,                       who left their lavender dreams, with dreamcatchers...                                                                                               I savour Nature’s calming  beauty which leaves me serene.                                                surrounded with that harmonious beauty,                                              inspire others to open their lilac senses to imbibe ,                              and preserve the wealth of the natural world -                                                   aquamarine oceans and coral mountains,                                                               majestic trees and cerulean sky!                                                                          erasing racism, sexism, child-abuse…                                                     doesn't happen instantly, we could be enthusiastic partners of those endeavours                                  focus on women empowerment, remembering                          mothers are pillars of the society - lives of children                                            bloom into exquisite flowers in the                                             gardens nurtured with tenderness                                             by their mothers.                                                           Poetry is my life, poetry is my soul....                                      often I float in the cobalt clouds of imagination and fantasy,                                but through my writing, not only the joys, pleasures, happinesses of life,                              I want to portray the part of life which is unknown to many,                                          the part which we deny to see it exists -   my pen bleeds with the pain...                                               tragic, dark, gloomy, often bleak!                                          want to create awareness...                                   about grim poverty, dismal injustices in the world,                                      the idea of equality, sharing, compassion, kindness,                                      to prove pens are mightier than swords....                                          joining hands of cooperation together,                                              we are able to change the world as it is right now! December 7, 2022 For "Resolutions For 2023" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:06:00 AM
Can I "float in cobalt clouds of imagination" with you dear Mala? You have written wonderfully of the guiding resolutions spanning your life - then and now so beautifully blended into your journey through life. They are the "exquisite flowers" planted by your dreams and beautiful dreams they are. How blessed are we have your poems. Congratulations on your win dear friend. Sending you blessings of exquisite joy, grace and peace! Happy New Year!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2023 9:50:00 PM
Dear Sam, Thank you so much. I always notice with amazement how you read the poems so thoroughly, and find the positive aspects to mention in detail! What an encouraging friend you are, along with being a great poet yourself! I get carried away when writing about the dreams I had, the goals I had as a young woman! Still now I haven't stopped dreaming, and expect to fulfill some to support needy human beings. Empowerment of women is one of my greatest goals. Sending you love, blessings, and wishes for another wonderful year!
Date: 1/5/2023 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love your line, “Poetry is my life, poetry is my soul.....” So very true. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/6/2023 9:44:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Paula, for your beautiful comments. I feel so inspired with encouraging comments like yours.
Date: 12/23/2022 8:10:00 PM
"mothers are pillars of the society - lives of children/ bloom into exquisite flowers in the gardens nurtured with tenderness by their mothers.".... Your poem contains so many beautiful resolutions. But I love the emphasis you have laid on grooming mothers. They are the ones to mold the future generation. All the Best in the contest, Mala !
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/24/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Valsa. Your thoughtful comments cheer me up, and inspire me to write. Your beautiful and brilliant poems are my source of inspiration too. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Love and Hugs ~ Mala
Date: 12/12/2022 11:03:00 PM
There are several important resolutions in your poem. May we live a happier life.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/13/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Appreciate your valuable comment.

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