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So this is all there will be from now on, since you've made up your mind to depart; no more TV, no talking, no people, no fun, no more girlfriends who play with your heart. You're a timid and tremulous creature, always wearing your soul on your sleeve; you can't for the life of you step on a bug but you simply don't know how to leave. How to leave things behind when they're done, how to let go a friendship that's dead, not to disinter love when it's all in your mind, and take charge of your own life instead. It's all just a question of balance, why must you suffer such pain? just see living as merely good judgment and you'll get your control back again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/10/2008 11:59:00 AM
Nice poem. But what if it's to hard and it hurt to much to let go? *Breana*
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Date: 12/7/2008 4:01:00 AM
Yes, if one cannot learn how to let go...they are surely doomed to a non-life of darness. aeesome, love Kristin
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:16:00 AM
Excellent poem, especially the third stanza! Wonderful advice given in this poem, and it flows so well. I just love quatrains. Thank you so much for your comments on my poem "Lament of the Philosopher's Hound"! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/5/2008 8:25:00 PM
"Just see living as good judgment"~Yes, I like your writing style Keith! I have read a couple of your gifted writes before~and truly, you are a rarity towards many, within these spoken words~always worth reading, these gems!~So, it is good to make your acquaintance-and I liked your write here dear Brother~"Warmth & Love To All You Love, John!"~Bye:)
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Date: 12/5/2008 12:46:00 PM
Great poem, Keith. I especially loved the third verse. Great rhyme scheme and meter! Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy holiday season. John
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:53:00 AM
Wonderful poem, this is just like me, it's so hard to let things go sometimes. awesome write, thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:50:00 AM
I am the same, so hard to let go of people gone, friendships dead, love lost.. all of it.. you put it well... ver well...Thank you so much for your comment on my poem "Grannie Angel"... and btw thanks for pointing out my spelling error, so much for spell check. I am missing Grannie today, its difficult, like your poem, hard to let it go... she is the reason I write, "write it, Constance, write down your thoughts and dreams, for the world to read".. thanks again.. Constance
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Date: 12/5/2008 11:37:00 AM
interesting peom!
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