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Below is the poem entitled "Consummation" which was written by poet john freeman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Prepare thus the bride chamber,
Good ointment smell doeth linger.
No kiss of mouth sweet as thine,
Naught compares to her passion’s wine.

By my side my beauty bride,
My rapture I cannot hide.
She opens her gown seam,
Beauty reveals as a dream,

My flower I see in thy skirt,
With thy sweet nectar I flirt.
With strokes of passion we toy,
With bursts of pleasure we Joy.

Copyright © john freeman

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  1. Date: 3/26/2011 10:20:00 PM
    and here is the other one. Sexy!

  1. Date: 3/17/2011 8:18:00 AM
    Congrats on your poetry making it past the first round John X two!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2011 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry X2 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Moses. Love Carol

  1. Date: 3/8/2011 1:56:00 AM
    wow. congrats!

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:33:00 PM
    Many congrats on your well deserved two first round successes John - Luv Janette

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:18:00 PM
    Congrats Moses on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...

  1. Date: 1/16/2011 1:51:00 PM
    Moses.. can hardly read your blog luv.. and your contest does not show finalized yet.. so could u let me know if u already judged ..thankxx my friend...

  1. Date: 1/13/2011 9:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week John. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/12/2011 5:10:00 PM
    Congrats Moses on the featured write. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 6:24:00 PM
    Congrats Moses on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend... a great one to share with us all with luv..

  1. Date: 1/9/2011 3:58:00 PM
    This was one of those that I missed, John. Congratulations on your fine win...didn't even know of this contest! Nevertheless, this is a beautiful sensual poem. Hope you have had a good day. Love, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win John in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 9:25:00 PM
    oh what a lovely poem. many congratulations. Thanks for your kind comments.

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 2:33:00 PM
    John congratulations on your success in Dr. Ram's contest. ;) hope your Sunday is a blessed one bb Wilma

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:25:00 AM
    John, many congratulations on your win in Dr.Ram's contest with this fine piece >> James

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 7:09:00 AM
    Congrats Moses on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest .. an exceptional write .. enjoy your wonderful win this happy Sunday my friend with luv..

  1. Date: 9/19/2010 6:23:00 AM
    Congratulations for your super win in my contest. I really love the title consummation, John. And thanks for your help to finalize the contest.

  1. Date: 8/24/2010 3:22:00 PM
    John, I admire your craft here. It is erotic and teasing, but not self conscious. That IS NOT easy to pull off. You did. My kudos and thank you as always. Regards, Gerard.

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 5:39:00 PM
    this is beautiful, Moses. what a work of passion & joyous love..<3 a wonderful time for these lovers, and a write cherished from above... i admire this poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 8/19/2010 11:09:00 PM
    wow, this is very good, so different from many of the wedding poems' topics. A very sensual write from you. Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea