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Constellation of My Dreams

My fantasy’s stallion I rode and galloped amongst The mystic stars Soon The constellation of my dreams I reached where Reality lingers! © Demetrios Trifiatis 18 September 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/19/2015 8:24:00 AM

love the image of the stallion galloping amongst the stars hugs eve

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/20/2015 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, for visiting and commenting in such a kind manner!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/18/2015 5:53:00 PM

A good read from you dear poet "Soon The constellation of my dreams I reached where Reality lingers! Where dreams fulfilled or what you have been longing for reach your hands.... I hope so for you my beloved poet..........A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/20/2015 4:24:00 AM

My friend, A.M., wonderful analysis! Thank you very much for your noble visit and comment!

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/18/2015 9:02:00 AM

This is just a wonderful capture of a timeless scene.Brilliant write.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/18/2015 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, dear Miraj, for your visit and lovely comment!

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/18/2015 7:29:00 AM

Your beautiful words make me smile this morning! ;)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/18/2015 4:38:00 PM

Happy to make you smile, dear Casarah! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Michael Tor

Date: 9/18/2015 7:00:00 AM

Beautiful Demetrios. A definite 7. Congratulations. Taking your dreams to another realm of reality.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/18/2015 4:38:00 PM

Michael, my friend, thank you for your delightful visit and comment!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/18/2015 5:37:00 AM

We may make our dreams reality with steadfast effort I believe. Your poem is lovely Demetrios! 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/18/2015 4:40:00 PM

Dearest Connie, how wonderful to see you again! Thank you for lovely comment and grading!