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Confusion

Up and down My feet are no longer situated on the ground I'm losing my focus My minds a buzz of locusts The world is spinning round Up and down Is the sky still blue? Or has that changed too? Is the grass still green? That remains to be seen! It's all just a blur Full of doubt, I'm unsure Up and down Is this a smile or a frown Nothing's the same It's a whole new game And yet life moves on And the past is gone Only the future remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/2/2013 7:48:00 AM
I could clearly feel the confusion; I also felt like I was on a poetic roller-coaster, which isn't a bad thing at all. I enjoyed this piece; good job and kudos :)
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