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Up and down
My feet are no longer situated on the ground
I'm losing my focus
My minds a buzz of locusts
The world is spinning round
Up and down
Is the sky still blue?
Or has that changed too?
Is the grass still green?
That remains to be seen!
It's all just a blur
Full of doubt, I'm unsure
Up and down
Is this a smile or a frown
Nothing's the same
It's a whole new game
And yet life moves on
And the past is gone
Only the future remains

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  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:48:00 AM
    I could clearly feel the confusion; I also felt like I was on a poetic roller-coaster, which isn't a bad thing at all. I enjoyed this piece; good job and kudos :)