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Conducting An Imaginary Orchestra In the Passenger Seat

i've seen it several times someone motioning, flourishing waggling, swinging, curving hunching, moulding, stooping pulling shapes, a twirling a form, a delineation, shadows fingers, tree branches, winding creeks sometimes a head inclines obstructing the cityscape what are they listening to? what are they talking about? we've done it, we've become greenwood sometimes a jungle i've done it alone after dropping you off cold storage becomes publicised i've done it i've done it, yes, i've cried in the car alone

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Date: 8/2/2021 11:26:00 AM
a great visual of true focus thanks for the share. Cheers!
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Date: 8/2/2021 10:26:00 AM
creative word play. Thank you for sharing your poem
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Date: 8/2/2021 9:28:00 AM
I just love this poem, Christopher! I can see why it won a prize... very clever, and ot just tumbles down the page! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/29/2021 9:16:00 AM
Christopher, congratulations on your win. There is so much energy, and emotion, in your words - like quickly passing scenery seen through the window of a car. All the best.
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Christopher Allen
Date: 3/29/2021 5:39:00 PM
Hey Sam! Thank you for your kind words. Best wishes to you too.
Date: 3/29/2021 6:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win!! an interesting write!!
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Christopher Allen
Date: 3/29/2021 5:40:00 PM
Cheers Krish! Best wishes my friend.
Date: 3/10/2021 3:47:00 PM
Hello John , i like this one. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:38:00 PM
Nicely done!
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