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Come Here, It Is Raining

Under the shade of a gentle tree Listening the songs of the wind Cracking its way to my ears Time of rain, the time is near And when it comes You can see the frogs dance In the ponds of green mold And green moss And the birds hide With me under the tree Getting wet That's what they fear Let the frog dance in the rain! You don't dance here! You will get wet! Come to me! Just come here!

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Date: 9/15/2023 5:37:00 AM
This is a great poem with lovely imagery Arastu. You set the scene so well that you can easily picture it with the rain and frogs dancing. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/15/2023 6:02:00 AM
Thanks :-)
Date: 9/7/2023 12:16:00 PM
You describe the scene well and can see that frog dancing in the rain while you hide under the tree.. love phyl
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/7/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poems, Phyl :-) I appreciate you very much
Date: 9/7/2023 6:34:00 AM
Well written poem, with great imagery and deep meaning
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Arastu Goyal
Date: 9/7/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you

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