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Come Gently

Come gently like a winding trellis stroking my shape as you fondle my vulnerability, and tease, tease curves of my spine with whispers to unleash what is half-awake in my eyes, draping my flesh with the scent of this moistened night… And I am lost among fibrous roots clinging to a warm pistil like a raging dart,a moonlit flame. Your bended arms warmly mount my transparent skin, only to hold back as the dizzy air blows these ruffled tresses smelling of earth and jasmine... You gaze at the cleavage of an open mouth, wandering on a tight pulse between the trellis of desire...how in this hungry glow, I cannot explain why your irises slay me bare; that on a sweltering duskfall so mysteriously anonymous, I seem to ask you to come gently and touch my waiting steam. Contest of Lewis Raynes That Is Sexy 6/22/2016

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Date: 6/23/2016 9:52:00 AM
OUTSTANDING!!
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Date: 6/23/2016 8:25:00 AM
Great sensual poem and like the other poets comments so many good lines to pick from, well done, congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2016 3:47:00 AM
aww should've placed much higher, nette, one of the best i've seen from you, i really love this one, too many great lines to pick out - congrats!
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this subtle and sweet write, my dear. To teas curves of your spine with whispers is such a lovely string of words...Beautiful
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Date: 10/15/2014 5:20:00 AM
love, love, love your poem. Congrats, keep up the great poetry
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Date: 10/14/2014 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your high marks in the contest. Enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 10/14/2014 6:44:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, my thoughts were already spinning as I read this your last stanza is heart racing
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:32:00 PM
Tasteful gentle seductive poem many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:15:00 PM
- Dear Nette a well deserved 2nd place !!!! - A kind word costs nothing and is still the most beautiful gift of all: Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/14/2014 10:53:00 AM
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL AND TASTEFUL! WONDERFUL. Congratulations on your well deserved win. I am totally impressed! Big Smiles.
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:29:00 AM
Jaw Dropping nette. Congratulations on your huge win. God Bless!
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:18:00 AM
Super,congrats Nette.
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations Nette.
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Date: 10/14/2014 2:35:00 AM
Wow Nette that's an amazing work! Congrats on huge win dear!
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Date: 10/9/2014 2:07:00 AM
Mmmmm.....to uproot your loneliness into my palm plush in tender grip, pinching the petals of your thin soft romance, rubbing them open to my face of shaded delight, my sumptuous specie of rarest flower I cup you with pollenated power..."Touch my waiting steam..." Ooooo...that's hot and lovely Nette, and I am enchanted by, "So mystetiously anonymous. .." this is an amazingly sensuous, and expert use of a flower lust metaphor Nette, a masterpiece and FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:14:00 PM
Nice double entendre here! A pretty, sensuous write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:57:00 PM
wow, this is a GREAT seductive poem. Is it for that particular contest? It sure seems perfectly suited for it, Nette, and should be a top poem in that challenge! the ending is really wonderful. The whole thing, I love it.
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:17:00 PM
This is the stuff poets strive for! Excellent piece for one who surely knows how to fire up the senses. Thanks a lot for commenting on my poem.
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Date: 10/7/2014 2:42:00 PM
I'm on a sabbatical leave from this flight of passion only to be tripped off the page and grabbed by your inviting, supreme write... whew, a pleasure to read a poem as rare as this ( stewing?).I'm blown away, Nette
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Date: 10/7/2014 2:22:00 PM
Difficult to come gently what with the humidity and aroma and all. I like this for the tenderness and sensitivity. Love, daver
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Date: 10/7/2014 10:03:00 AM
Erotic but blushful, sensual yet shy, provoking although on guard! A lady's expression of passion wrapped in caution! Excellent, dear nette!
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Date: 10/7/2014 9:17:00 AM
This brought all the senses together,so tempting---- yet you managed to keep it at such a classy level.Nette I might have found the female version of DH Lawrence in you. Thank you!
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Date: 10/7/2014 8:56:00 AM
Uhmm, damn. The scene says it all without being too obvious.You weave artful erotica as a siren tempting all of man to drown withing the waves of you And what male i ask could ever refuse? Just wow, wow, Nette.
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Date: 10/7/2014 3:49:00 AM
- A soft and romantic poem my friend Nette ! - A pleasure to read :) - I hope your Tuesday will be lovely and full of romance <3 <3 <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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