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Candles sway gently illuminating our tiny two bedroom home Soft and sweet love songs dance gracefully from room to room I pick you up, pull you in so fresh and inviting is your fragrance I close my love struck eyes and twirl you endlessly and effortlessly through fields of jasmine skipping past cloud nine drinking you in one kiss at a time Moment upon moment building a life with you at my side Come closer as I wrap you in my arms hold you tighter make your burdens lighter Come closer make this moment divine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/30/2015 9:20:00 PM
Hats off to the King of romance! Great poem Tim
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:12:00 PM
- Close and warm love ..... what more could we want .... lovely and sweet poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 12:07:00 PM
Lovely. The penguins love your poems, too, but I fear they're planning on kidnapping you, soon! It's probably caused by those pirate clothes they're wearing while on their pirate Dragon ship that's affecting their wee minds. Seems they want to attract more girls aboard! They think cuteness isn't enough! Silly penguins! Don't worry! I'll keep a closer watch on them. And Dragon is hearing about Cloud nine every where. He's interested in checking it out! Thankfully we only had 6 clouds yesterday!
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:50:00 AM
It does indeed sound sublime. I enjoyed your romantic piece Tim.
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:11:00 AM
An ethereally romantic poem, dear Tim! Wish you the dance never to end!
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:15:00 PM
I so love the fields of Jasmines.. Purple and pink are my favourites. Such a romantic scene, with a comforting feeling, love it.
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