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Come Back To Us

Your heart has become so dark
No truths are spoken from your lips
You are only about yourself anymore
We wonder where has the real you gone

What happened to turn you so cruel
Asking to be forgiven again and again
Will you ever turn your life back around
Cling to the love that is given to you

Hold eye contact to your family lifeline
Know that we are here for you evermore
When we see you hurt we hurt even more
We love you more then you will ever know

You are hurting more then just yourself
Take a good look into your mirror dear
Ask yourself where the gentle you has gone
We pray you find her and her gentle heart

And when you find her once more
We pray you will come back to us
Our love for you continues to grow
This you should always remember      

Entry for P.D.'s Free Verse Contest
written by: Carol Brown
10th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 3/29/2012 9:50:00 AM
    Carol this so emotional and heartfelt. It hits very close to home. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 9:50:00 PM
    I have decided to read your writings because you had read mine....this is so sad but so beautiful and well written. I enjoyed it. -JenniKatherine

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 6:52:00 AM
    Yes congratulations Carol! Another beautiful poem. And thank you for all the support you show others.

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 3:56:00 PM
    Lovely and touchy poem,Carol.Your words are so passionate and so true...Congratulations on your win...And thanks for sharing....

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Touching plea for one so obviously loved. - Chuck

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 2:04:00 PM
    Congrats Carol...I really enjoyed this one.

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Congrats, Carol. This is a touching poem, as if it tells itself. :)

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 9:14:00 AM
    touching one.. congrats on your win...~ sashi

  1. Date: 2/25/2012 7:07:00 AM
    Thank you. I rewrote and added a couple lines to this one before entering in this contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:59:00 PM
    congrats Carol on an amazing write and win luv for these astounding words of depth and meaning .. PD was impressed as was I and am sure as all who will read this piece ..

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Carol. I sure remember this one.

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 8:52:00 PM
    CAROL~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

  1. Date: 2/23/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Good luck with this poem in Brian's Contest! God bless, Maureen

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:56:00 PM
    carol I seem to remember this one. Just read your comment on the blog about deleting poems and I really agree with you. It could not be good to delete the poems and then feel so sad about it. I sure hope you saved all your marvelous poetry to slowly add back up on here, dear!

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 10:10:00 PM
    i enjoy the moments you speak of, carol.. this is vleak but sooo beautifully rendered.. winner in my list...take care and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
    I feel the pain and frustration Carol , written so well it opens doors to many who read this i shouldnt wonder , best of luck in the contest , Hugs , Declan xxx

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Sad and talented write, i used to be similar to this. Very hard. Good luck in the contest carol!

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 1:37:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one..Good luck in Brian's contest...Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:02:00 AM
    Oh, Carol, unfortunately I have met quite a few people whose hearts have been darkened by the challenges they face in life. This poem offers so much encoragement that it brought tears to my eyes. Wishing you success in Brian's latest contest. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:51:00 AM
    Your words are so full of compassion and forgiveness, lovely write!