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Come and Find Me In My Solitude

On one side flows the whitish blue river On the other side a lonely yellow In between, my hollow shadows shiver On looks the miles and miles of void meadow All rich poems have since been harvested All dancing steps in jingles have been spent No flame, the wick and oil are exhausted No hands to hold and hug for warm content If you really come you’ll see the moons Eclipsed by the long neck of the camel Sands in eyes I keep looking at the dunes Debris of once a beautiful castle Just Look at the deadly strokes of time’s axe The vicissitudes in the tales of cracks _______________________________________ 03/12/16

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Date: 12/5/2016 11:08:00 AM
Nice Piece. Good Composition. Best Wishes
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/6/2016 4:42:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/3/2016 7:47:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet, Probir. I absolutely love it:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/4/2016 3:48:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 12/3/2016 7:35:00 PM
Well expressed poetic piece.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/4/2016 3:52:00 AM
Thank you ... yes, a 'poetic piece' towards a sonnet !..
Date: 12/3/2016 11:25:00 AM
This is a marvel of a sonnet my dear friend, Probir! Excellently done! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/4/2016 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios ...
Date: 12/3/2016 7:57:00 AM
This is a powerful poem. Well written. :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/3/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/3/2016 7:30:00 AM
- I find this deeply moving ... really wonderful written, Probir - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/3/2016 9:30:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/3/2016 6:55:00 AM
Poetry of solitude, and change of attitude read by a multitude who really know it, but beyond the dunes there is a wonderful castle, and the secret chamber for the selected one.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/3/2016 9:31:00 AM
Very nicely said ... Thank you ...

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