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Cold Steel In My Soul

Time passes by as a eagle soar high above . My heart aches as my soul pours out kindness to all. Yet my soul is dark and cold from walking alone. Could it be no one meant for me? Would anyone cry for me if my life was done? Thoughts at time of letting go of this world and letting my blood flow. I feel the blade of the cold steel plunging deep into my soul. All I long is for one to make me whole and not walk alone. My soul is like an ice burg drifting alone in the vast sea of life melting slowly away. People come and go but yet I feel alone as I drift through life with darkness in my soul

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Date: 1/24/2014 5:39:00 PM
Michael This is a deep and powerful write. The pain is flowing out of you in every line. I hope this is still not happening or how you feel. Sending you a big hug and friendly good thoughts. Thanks for the great comment on My Love Wasn't Enough poem.
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Date: 1/24/2014 5:45:00 PM
I am fine at the moment as you can tell I deal with deppresion occasionally but I am fine at present. Thanks for comment and thanks for asking about me.
Date: 10/28/2013 1:35:00 PM
This poem truly resonated with me. I felt the depth of your emotion. I have held that razor blade to my wrists far too many times to count so I know what that feel like. Very powerful piece; kudos! :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 4:33:00 PM
Thanks for the great words on this peace you. You might also relate to my soul of tears poem. It is another one I wrote after getting rejected then depressed

Book: Shattered Sighs