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Cold Outside

The crisp blue sky, clouds as white as snow. The leafs no more, a little red robin perched on a branch. It's cold outside I freeze I freeze it's cold outside bring me into the warm. Icy pavements, frosted cars the sunshine threw is it deceiving me? It's cold outside I freeze I freeze it's cold outside bring me into the warm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/23/2009 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week.God bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/22/2009 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations Yasmin on your poem being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/22/2009 9:35:00 AM
Yasmin - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/21/2009 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 1/21/2009 1:54:00 PM
It's definitely winter in North Dakota so I can relate to this one. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/19/2009 4:19:00 PM
congrats in your poetry being featured thid week!**Maryam*
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Date: 1/19/2009 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2009 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/28/2008 9:49:00 AM
Yasmin - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
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Date: 12/26/2008 5:46:00 AM
great poem just for the season
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Date: 12/24/2008 12:49:00 PM
Yasmin its winter bro - guess I'm lucky my wife makes a wonderful heater - Welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas and God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/23/2008 2:08:00 PM
Nice poem, welcome to poetry soup and Happyy Holidays...Raul
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