Get Your Premium Membership

Coconut

It answered to my thirst from the top When I watered a coconut palm root My hands stroked his head's top He kicked me in force with his foot!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/22/2014 12:04:00 PM
Love the humor to your poems. love phyl
Login to Reply
Thajudeen Avatar
Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/23/2014 3:40:00 AM
Thank you dear poet Babcock.
Date: 10/22/2014 1:01:00 AM
Lol... Very funny poem, my friend! It made me smile.The coconuts head kicked you in force with its foot. So silly and funny, Muhammad. Hahahaaa. I love it! :) Take care! xxxx D.
Login to Reply
Thajudeen Avatar
Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 10/22/2014 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and sitting.

Book: Shattered Sighs