Clouded

dusky hour I'm tryin to sleep these nite time showers they become my beat as I walk from bar to bar wish I knew where you are because you've clouded my mind kim holmes

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Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2008 1:07:00 PM

Very soft. Congratulations on this poem being featured, it was lovely. ~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 12/7/2008 4:37:00 AM

This is beautiful. Very sentimental and just to the point. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

John Heck

Date: 12/5/2008 5:30:00 PM

Kimmy - Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John

Elaine George

Date: 12/5/2008 5:21:00 PM

Hi Kimmy, Congratulations on your feature of the week. Most deserving. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2008 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 12/1/2008 4:41:00 PM

So much truth to your words--a sad lifestyle for some. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/1/2008 4:03:00 PM

Congrats Kimmy on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 12/1/2008 12:49:00 PM

Congratulations Kimmy on your poem "Clouded" being featured. Vince

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/30/2008 9:32:00 PM

Kimmy that was both sad and beautiful - Be careful there is a lot of bad in this world - God Bless, MJ