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Closer than a Kiss

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Closer than a Kiss

moon beams dance, whisper softly by her side a nymphic aura, her beauty enshrouds, just fragrant veils of roses and jasmines... a shy full moon retreats behind night clouds, passion's crowning glory, unabashed bride Envelop Quintet Rhyme Scheme: a b c b a Ten syllable per line

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  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:51:00 AM
    This is wonderful :) Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Yesha.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:55:00 AM
    Belated congratulations on your winning spot Yesha xx

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:15:00 PM
    Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. I loved the personification Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Congrats on the BIG win!!This one is so poetic!

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 6:19:00 PM
    finally I can come to this one and comment. FANTASTIC , Yesha. you got second place and the title inspired lines of such beautiful imagery. I particularly enjoyed that last line, the metaphor of the unabashed bride. just wonderful. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 2:51:00 PM
    Very pretty, Yesah.... love the crowning image....pd

  1. Date: 12/28/2012 1:59:00 PM
    very beautiful, and enchanting...

  1. Date: 12/27/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Geeze, every poem of yours that I have read so far is breath taking!

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 9:34:00 AM
    Mere ko bhi isi topic mey likhna tha....

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    Date: 12/25/2012 8:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) I knew you'd write on it...
  1. Date: 12/25/2012 9:33:00 AM
    Wow...Wonderful poem!Merry Christmas to you and yours too!

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Beautiful like a new bride, Yesh, good luck with it. Have yourself a very happy new year!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Yesha wow I love this, it is full of beauty, very well crafted and good luck.. A happy peaceful time to you and your family...David

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 6:07:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and expressive work..Creative idea on your part..Thanks for stopping by..May this Christmas Day be blessed..Sara

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 2:52:00 AM
    love the description of the moon and clouds. Beautiful beautiful beautiful imagery!:)