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Closed Heart

My heart is closed to you Don't bother to knock Don't bother to ring the bell Don't bother to leave a gift on my doorstep It won't do It won't do You hurt me through and through It's over It's true My heart is closed to you! Adieu!

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/26/2014 5:18:00 AM

Oh mon Dieu! That firm? That's my girl! It is so beautiful your writing, so determent, so powerful, dear Eileen! Where are you? You are missed!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2014 3:48:00 PM

Knowing you Eileen I am sure you will leave the door so very very slightly ajar...just in case. You are too good not to allow forgiveness another chance. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/22/2014 8:53:00 PM

You go girl. You're got the power.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/21/2014 8:31:00 AM

I can't imagine you with a closed heart, it is so contrary to your loving nature.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2014 2:20:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. I'm trying very hard to change this nature. My heart is battle scarred and tired. I'm tired. Thanks for the visit and for the kind words.

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/20/2014 6:53:00 PM

Your justice is decisive, your heart armed. Powerful poem Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/21/2014 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, Justin. I'm trying very hard to be powerful and decisive. My heart bleeds easily and is unruly. I'm trying to discipline it with a firm hand of reason. Glad you could pass by.