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Clockwork Train

A little after twelve o’clock, She slumbered at the window pane And only I, the kitten, heard, Then, saw the phantom clockwork train. The driver smiled and waved his hand; He had a tubby stripey cat. The purring cat was fast asleep, Inside the driver’s upturned hat. As petals floated on the air, I longed to join that happy band, But couldn’t leave the little girl, And snuggled closer to her hand. I’m glad I stayed with little Jean, But sometimes dream what could have been. For Vie’s Trains & Fantasy contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/27/2015 8:43:00 AM
A smile worthy write.
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Date: 8/7/2015 3:32:00 PM
A sweet poem Jack. Enjoyed the flow of this one. love phyl
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:26:00 PM
Oh, Jack, this is so delightful and sweet and a winner, love it 10 +++++
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Date: 7/31/2015 11:15:00 AM
Your have a gift in telling a story that lets the reader feel a part of what is unfolding before them. Emile.
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:35:00 PM
Jack, excellent...David
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:33:00 AM
Very creative..I like the rhythm and flow of it as well..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2015 7:37:00 AM
Looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 7/30/2015 6:04:00 AM
So it's true that cats have dreams...A good entry for tyhe contest, Jack. It appears you've been away. Hope you're keeping well. Kim :-)
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:04:00 AM
a wonderful flight of fancy Jack gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 7/29/2015 8:46:00 PM
You should really watch what you eat before you go to bed. :) Really enjoyed your feline flight of fancy jack. Good to hear from you.
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:44:00 PM
Truly fanciful, Jack. Should be a winner. Thank you for your comment on my poem and I am improving in health every day.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:36:00 PM
A lovely and excellence write, I like how penned it and the imagery ......A.M.
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Date: 7/29/2015 5:31:00 PM
Your imagination has served you well, Jack! Lovely content and an apt title to go with it. Love the end couplet. #7 // paul
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