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Climbing That Hill

Climbing That Hill Slowly I climbed that silent hill just to sit in solitary thought Desperation fights against my will destroying all the mercies bought As I crest that hill to summit high a calm feeling washes all over me No more shall I seek mercy to buy it has been sent in all that I see A stand of mighty oaks looming tall so many birds singing all around This majestic wonder gifted to us all Nature's blessings so eagerly found Whip-poor-wills singing to early morn hidden so cleverly on the wet ground I muse, happy just to have been born paying homage with such loving sound 08-03-2014 Written from memory of my visit to my old hunting grounds early last year. I took a day off to just go clear my thoughts. I came home that night a new man. God's remedy was there just for the asking....

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Date: 11/9/2014 4:15:00 PM
beautiful imagery and flow to the poem many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2014 11:58:00 PM
Finally I've judged my "Solitude" competition, and while I wait for Soup to post the winners list, when I will make a proper Blog announcement, I'm catching up with a few contestants to let them know how they did. Robert your poem went to all the places that inspired this competition in the first place. Well done mate, you came in 8th.
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Date: 8/10/2014 8:11:00 PM
Hey Robert, you have just gotten me into that new man feeling after reading this poem. Just a great write, the rhyming and flow of the poem is excellent. Tremendous job.
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Date: 8/6/2014 1:02:00 PM
You too have a way with words which turn into tremendous poems. Went to the garden party and pants looked like I was a smarty Then I was thrown for a loop when poem ended up on Poetry Soup. We need to have a Battle of the Poems with someone writing a poem in response to the other poem. What do you think? Jim Horn
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful, peaceful images. I love to be surrounded by nature and a peaceful silence.
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