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RING Propose Betrothal Adorning my hand a gleaming band of gold - finally husband and wife. “A symbol of our commitment” Contest Clarity in a treasure Box Sponsored by Nette Onclaud Checked with how many syllables 1,2,3 5,6,7 8 06~27~16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 6:15:00 PM

this is very nice, Jan and it's a very reasonable thing to expect in one's treasure box. Congrats for the win, dearie. Hope I have time to get to my emails next. Gotta hurry and do dinner soon!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I'm still trying to catch up on a week of comments missed lol:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2016 1:36:00 PM

"for better or worse" so beautifully crafted, dear jan.... fine congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2016 10:00:00 AM

An excellent winning entry for this contest, Jan. I keep my ring in a 'treasure box' since it does not fit any more, and wear a duplicate instead. ~ Congratulations & Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks Paul its quite poingnant as when we were away Bob bought me a lovely diamond ring to celelbrate our 25th anniversary:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2016 4:31:00 AM

Well, Jan, I did try out this one at last:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:26:00 PM

I'll drop by Jo:-):-):-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2016 3:24:00 AM

Oh! This is so cute:) I don't know what to write about! So, I'm skipping this one...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:26:00 PM

Thanks Jo I don't enter every contest sometimes my muse fails me:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2016 8:23:00 PM

beautiful, Jan, good luck in the contest !Thank you so very much for reading my poem “Life Mistake Were Many In Silence Wrung.” Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2016 6:25:00 PM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/28/2016 10:24:00 AM

Beautiful poem drawn with beautiful theme. Good luck in the contest my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 12:20:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/28/2016 10:19:00 AM

Beautiful poem...Gud luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 12:19:00 PM

Thanks Supraja:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Hauser

Date: 6/28/2016 7:46:00 AM

Nothing more beautiful than the commitment of marriage..wonderful write!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 10:06:00 AM

Just celebrated our 25th anniversary Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/28/2016 2:51:00 AM

Absolutely precious! A seven dear Jan! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/28/2016 12:33:00 AM

What touching work! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 6:44:00 AM

Thanks Matthew

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/27/2016 8:04:00 PM

When my gf asked for a ring, I said oh sorry honey I am not Mohamed ali, I dont box!! Wonder why I am single? :) (and I should have learned as she punched me in the nose after that)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2016 6:43:00 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx