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Circumstantial Evidence 2

The police continued their investigation and were extremely puzzled. They couldn't figure out how those small footprints found by the window be possibly responsible for the disappearance of an eight year old, Ann Marie Burr. Sadly the case was not solved. Ann Marie Burr's parents suffered through many years of not knowing what happened to their precious daughter. The years went by and there was no news of their missing child. Fourteen years had gone by. Mrs Burr was watching a news bulletin from her local news station. She heard of a mans name that was linked to several murders. The name kept ringing in her mind over and over again. Finally she called her girlfriend and asked her if she had ever heard this familiar name. Her girlfriend told her thinking for a minute, no I honestly, don't remember this name. Beverly thanked her and hung up. Several hours later Beverly's phone rings, her friend excitedly tells her yes, now I remember that name! That was the paperboy. I am absolutely sure It was the neighborhood paperboy. TED BUNDY!!! Serial killer Ted Bundy lived several blocks from the kidnapped child. The small footprints were for a small boy that were found outside the window. They say it was Ted Bundy's first murder. He was fourteen years old when he committed it. Her body was never found and her parents died not knowing where their daughter was. Mrs Burr wrote a letter to Bundy asking for closure, to please tell her where her daughter was. Bundy never did. He was linked to 36 murders but a detective that interviewed him said he had told him he was responsible for over 100 murders. He was eventually put to death. Michael Tor 9/22/2015

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Date: 10/9/2015 1:33:00 AM
very impressive write
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Joan
Date: 10/7/2015 6:14:00 PM
Wow! You have a unique way of writing and engaging your audience; an interesting story indeed.
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Date: 9/24/2015 5:25:00 AM
I was enthralled from start to finish! Excellent and chilling tale. Two small changes, line three put a "could" between "window" and "be" also in the last paragraph "closer" should be closure. This is a piece that should be published, outstanding writing.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/24/2015 9:32:00 AM
I'm happy you liked it Richard. I appreciate your corrections. You have an excellent eye for detail. It is a chilling account and true. Thanks Richard for your appreciated comments.
Date: 9/23/2015 8:31:00 PM
Dear Michael You have the talent for great storytelling skills and I agree with the others you should write a book because you can draw your readers in, and make them relate to the story you are offering the reader, cheri
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/23/2015 9:25:00 PM
Cheri you brighten my days with your kind and generous comments. I love writing. Maybe someday. Thank you Cheri.
Date: 9/23/2015 2:02:00 PM
Captivating story extremely well narrated. You have got it my friend, Michael! Go for a book! A seven!
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/23/2015 9:23:00 PM
Thank you my beloved friend.

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