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Choices We've Made ---

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Choices We've Made ---

waste overflowing
             wilted rose buds, last night’s meal
rotten     discarded
choices we’ve made yesterday 
             the stench unmistakable 

Kyoka is to the tanka what senryû is to the haiku

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Awesome tanka, Su...I learn from you each time I read your poems,,,also thanks so much for placing my tanka 3rd in your contest...have a wonderful day! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 11:12:00 PM
    Thanks for the note; and reminding us of our responsibility in whatever we get back...:) Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:12:00 AM
    very good how you related the two things. I like this form, Su

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    Date: 10/28/2012 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, it gives one more freedom... ;-)