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Checkmate

We both love each other it's not hard to figure out, what's really hard is dealing with doubt. From the time we're apart, we're breaking our hearts, With disillusions and lies, to better our lives. Trying to gain something we think we can have, when it was right there next to us, then we feel sad. Hurting ourselves for trying so hard, being nothing more than selfish and taking it so far. To the point of to return, a place none of us will go together, A checkmate in life, and it never gets better.

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Date: 5/17/2009 2:06:00 PM
Jon, congrats on being featured this week!
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Date: 5/16/2009 1:51:00 PM
Jon, nice work and congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 5/16/2009 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/16/2009 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful and deeply meaningful words. Well done. Congratulations on your feature! Izzy
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Date: 5/15/2009 2:14:00 PM
Wonderful! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 5/15/2009 5:53:00 AM
this piece is awesome. you are such a great poet. a well deserved feature.... keep writing. great you!. love Leke
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Date: 5/12/2009 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jon. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:55:00 PM
Interesting view--but there is always hope of things getting better. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/11/2009 11:02:00 AM
Congrats on your excellent featured write of the week! Affairs of the heart, never easy. Good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:00:00 AM
Congrats Jon on "Checkmate" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/10/2009 10:26:00 PM
Congratulations my friend on this featured write. Ernilando
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