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Changing Sky

How many are the years our world has been an entity? And for how many more has there been sky, the earth’s celestial skin, which must have somewhat changed from years before? In purer times, man may have seen it loom with diamond clarity of layered blues. Though like today, it also grayed with gloom, it must have dazzled dusks in splendid hues. And even now, despite new damage done to its most fragile part, how it can shine with utter brilliance, changing with the sun while we below keep marring sky’s design! Perhaps a Holocaust will bleed it red. Though changed, it will remain when all are dead.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/16/2016 8:41:00 PM
Another brilliant sonnet Andrea./|\
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Date: 12/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
Wow, What an incredible poem. I adore the rhyme, meter, and message of this poem. This will be going in my favorites.
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
Great entry and winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
Andrea, .... congrats once again *****SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2013 8:56:00 PM
You are fantastic at sonnets. The ever changing sky will keep on changing long after we are gone. Imagine what it will be like a thousand years from not. love phyl
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Date: 7/24/2013 5:18:00 PM
I expected this to be a winner, Congratulations Petal. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:47:00 PM
Andrea, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:02:00 AM
you certainly have a winning formula. It`s called talent..
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Date: 7/23/2013 8:01:00 PM
Yet another dynamite poem, another winner. Congratulations, my friend... Jack
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on your super win Andrea love how you write hope I get better too
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Date: 7/23/2013 2:26:00 PM
An excellent sonnet Andrea. I love the last stanza. Congratulations on you super win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/8/2013 6:11:00 PM
Oh yes Petal, put the wind up us all why don't yer lol. But that 'perhaps' does loom large in the sky, I would agree. I see you tried to placate yourself with Tom, pathetic lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/5/2013 4:14:00 PM
love this thought provoking piece, my friend
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:41:00 PM
No, not a pretty picture, Andrea - but very prettily painted.-Red
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Date: 7/2/2013 1:57:00 PM
Wonderful!See you can mould any topic into the Sonnet form :)
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:40:00 AM
P.S. My terzanelle took me a few hours to write - though not in one sitting. It is certainly a challenging form!!
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Date: 7/2/2013 7:40:00 AM
WOW. I love where you decided to take this topic. It is so true - We are slowly destroying our beautiful world. As always, a gorgeous sonnet written by your deft hands!
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Date: 7/1/2013 5:26:00 PM
Sobering thought. Well expressed.
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:36:00 PM
Contemplation of the dust. New creations we just can't trust. Dawning in a day delivered. Maybe that's why the fearful shivered. Hello my friend. Thank you for the support you send. A HAPPY BIRTHDAY to your Joe. May many more, he come to know. Toodles. :)
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:24:00 PM
a beautiful poem with perfect rhyme! very impressive...
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
great sonnet Andrea...best wishes...thanks for stopping by
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:40:00 AM
Touching poem wonderfully done. Great truth of future end it's related with sonnet. Excellent way you have shown here. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/1/2013 8:40:00 AM
Andrea a great message. Humanity needs to first achieve Heaven on earth, making the earth a better place for: gender harmony, spiritual harmony, racial harmony, and ecological harmony. Is that possible? Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/1/2013 5:36:00 AM
Excellent. Very meaningful write. Enjoyed it. Tfs
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Date: 7/1/2013 2:29:00 AM
Beautifully penned Andrea.
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