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Changing Sky

Come, watch with me my darling child, before you go to bed Here, hold my hand, while evening comes and takes the day away Evening shadows tiptoe to what the sun has said And now it's time to listen to what the moon will say Here, hold my hand, while evening comes and takes the day away We'll watch the sun dip gently, in the cooling twilight air And now it's time to listen to what the moon will say All the daytime weary creatures, have gone to nest and lair We'll watch the sun dip gently in the cooling twilight air Let's be witness to the fire that burns in evening's sky All the daytime weary creatures, have gone to nest and lair While twilight paints it's crimson colors on a canvas vast and wide Let's be witness to the fire that burns in evening's sky Time suspends as if one moment, in this fragile hush of time While twilight paints it's crimson colors on a canvas vast and wide And then we'll see the faintest trace of stars begin to climb Time suspends as if one moment, in this fragile hush of time So gently, watch the dark erase the last of fading light And then we'll see the faintest trace of stars begin to climb Enclosing us within the change, of shadows of the night So gently, watch the dark erase the last of fading light Evening shadows tiptoe to what the sun has said Enclosing us within the change, of shadows of the night Come, watch with me my darling child, before you go to bed... ____________ 6//26/13

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Date: 6/19/2017 2:10:00 PM
I agree w/Drake, just a gorgeous Pantoum, Richard. Beautifully expressed. Very fine poetry. May love light your path always.
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:45:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous! I wanted to be in this poem. That rarely happens for me. A favorite.
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Date: 6/26/2013 9:07:00 PM
I like this one so much I am going to add it to my faves! The thrilling shades of evening combined with the excellent rhythm of your verses make this poem hard to beat! Very peaceful and with a pleasant, relaxed flow from one subject to the next.
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:41:00 AM
A beautiful piece you have penned. I love it and will add it to my fav. love phyl
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:22:00 AM
No lullaby needed - the child is fast asleep. Pretty pieced. daver
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:14:00 AM
This is very beautoful sweet Carrie..A nice poem i can rezd for my baby daugjter as she grows a bit older.I will add it to my favourites..It would be easier to find..Just beautoful
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