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Changing Season

golden amber leaves waiting for closure from the seasons warmth in kindred spirit they flow dancing merrily as they fall twirling with delight to the ground below. soon seasons change winter's cold dramatic climate will blow and scatter aimlessly covering all in a soft white blanket hiding each fallen leaf under the newly fallen snow until springs warm glow.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/28/2011 5:18:00 PM

We are almost there Phyllis, this closes the season with sadness and beauty.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2011 10:32:00 AM

I could just feel the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Have a great holiday..Sara

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/2/2011 5:07:00 PM

I loved your imagery.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/2/2011 4:53:00 AM

Nice poem for the upcoming season...fall. I can see the floating leaves...no snow this far south, though. But, I do know it is beautiful! (Soupmail)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2011 2:40:00 AM

A pretty picture of those golden leaves, as kindred spirit! I wrote a poem long ago called DAncingLeaves and this one makes me remember it. thanks for all those sweet comments the other night, my friend. It is so late and I am here trying to catch up on two days worth of comments. Wish me luck. I want to get up well rested to greet my Friday. I hope all is well with you! Luv,Andrea

Date: 8/31/2011 6:46:00 PM

Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Spring is my favorite season. Guess I have awhile to wait on that. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Blessings to you. Karen

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/30/2011 4:19:00 PM

The seasons change so gracefully in this read and as well so beautifully. The details are marvelous as is the flow of the read. Terrific! Hi! Michael

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/29/2011 9:03:00 PM

slow down , slow down! lets enjoy the fall first! john

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/28/2011 6:57:00 PM

How great is the change of seasons! You capture the feeling very well in this ode! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Stephan McBride

Date: 8/27/2011 11:49:00 AM

very wonderful poem , so descriptive to let one be in this poem , thanks for your comments I greatly appreciate them, May the Lord continue to Bless and comfort you, love Stephan

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/26/2011 10:04:00 PM

a delightful and lovely poem, Phyllis!! Summer has flown by,....and soon your poem will be even more timely with watching the snow fly! Enjoyed this one!! Oh....and I'm sending a soupmail right away for you ( fyi) :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/26/2011 9:00:00 PM

a dreamy write light & love

Lynn Hanna Barany

Date: 8/26/2011 8:23:00 PM

Hi Phyllis, Thanks for comment...I am new to this site and am just starting to read poetry from the collection of many talents. I liked Changing Season very much, I will for sure read more. Lynn Barany

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/26/2011 12:12:00 AM

lovely eloquent lines Phyl ..breathtaking to welcome Fall though I am hanging on to Summer with dear life..haha..and the umbrella as it is raining steadily ..and tomorrow eye of the storm hurricane Irene will skirt by Florida luv..so trying to read many beautiful poems like this one to ease my mind luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2011 11:49:00 PM

Dear Phyllis, you have your way of giving nature the best season change ever. Even under the snow I see the beauty in the spring waiting to glow. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night~ p.d.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/25/2011 8:27:00 PM

A very nice poem..hard to believe were into fall soon...BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 3:46:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your very interesting poetry today Phyllis. Love, Carol

Emma Mantle

Date: 8/25/2011 1:45:00 PM

Nice write on the changing of the seasons Phyllis, beautifully expressed. Best wishes Em :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/25/2011 11:22:00 AM

enjoyed....your poetic passion presented proudly powerful!