Chance

The misty murky forest deep Forewarned his frantic finding flight A chance to search without a peep The misty murky forest deep The only chance her heart to keep Was finding her to make it right The misty murky forest deep Forewarned his frantic finding flight

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/30/2023 11:32:00 AM

I enjoyed your "Chance" write. Watch out for "The misty murky forest deep." Don't know what one may find. Have a great day............

Andy Chunn
Date: 2/5/2023 2:05:00 PM

Thanks for you input. Your support is most appreciated!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/19/2023 7:04:00 PM

This has a sinister charm to it, wondering what would happen to the search, Andy:)

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/22/2023 2:45:00 PM

Thanks Jo....not sure what would have happened!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 1/14/2023 5:04:00 AM

This is terrific, Andy. I'm generally not a fan of the repetitiveness of the triolet, but it really works well here to my ears anyway, lol. I very much like how the opener is personified and then objectified.

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/17/2023 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Jeff....I really appreciate your input. Not generally a fan myself but....well you know. Thanks again.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/13/2023 7:32:00 PM

This has a dark romance to it, the 'misty murky forest deep' is so alluring, best of luck in the contest, Andy~

Andy Chunn
Date: 1/17/2023 3:48:00 PM

Thanks Michelle. I always appreciate your input. Best wishes!