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Celluloid End

Lovers lips promise despair The needle- Full of poison, Houses acid daydreams Choices are made This is a celluloid end.

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John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 8:24:00 AM

Melissa - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/29/2008 7:53:00 PM

Melissa - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2008 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 8:11:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Marycile Beer

Date: 8/13/2008 3:27:00 PM

Sorry for the outcome of the poem, Milissa. Perhaps the next feature will be a happier one. God Bless, Cile

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/11/2008 8:56:00 AM

Congrats Melissa on Celluloid End being featured once again. Love, shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/11/2008 4:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Melissa . Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/10/2008 7:19:00 PM

Congrats on being featured this week - Being a ex-junkie my mind goes to one place when needles & Poison are mentioned - Great poem &God Bless

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/10/2008 5:12:00 PM

Congrats on the re-feature. Vince