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CAUGHT BY YOU

Olive Eloisa Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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CAUGHT BY YOU

I glance at you
I saw you giving a cue
I walk slowly towards you
Seeing you a little blue
I tried to hold on your hand
Smile, I saw you extend
Wink and smile I replied too
As I feel a spark land
We have conversation
Oh my!!!
We are quite a unison
Unbelievably, same likes
Good, we don't look alike
As time runs so fast
We didn't want to last..
Nevertheless, we parted
With distance we parted..
But we remain in contact..
As we exchange numbers back..
Maybe God blessed that day
When we met along the alley
Now, I feel
Faith and fate might be real..

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  1. Date: 10/14/2014 1:54:00 PM
    It's tremendous feeling being caught by someone. It saddens me that many never last. Is it just a test of life, who knows. I agree with Artur, this poem deserves more reads Olive, James :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/14/2014 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :D thanks much Mr. James.. :D appreciate it.. :D
  1. Date: 5/30/2014 10:36:00 PM
    Ok now I am shocked only 1 person left a comment!!!! Such a beautiful poem!!! :) :) :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/31/2014 6:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thnaks much Arthur you appreciate it.. :)
  1. Date: 5/30/2014 10:30:00 PM
    I am shocked, shocked at such a lovely and beautiful poem and shocked no one made a comment on its beauty!!!! Oh but yes I am curious, who did catch you?

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 5/31/2014 6:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahahha.. :D secret.. :D