Cash

Can you lend me some money? Any amount will do. Sometimes we all can use a break. Help a brother out with some bread! Four Letter words and Acrostic challenge contest. Wrote a second one because my word was not on the list. Good thing I read the instructions *lol*. My original title was "Half Baked"

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2013 3:59:00 PM

love it...PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 5:33:00 PM

Thanks Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 3:34:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning entry..Congrats..Way to go..Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:36:00 PM

Thanks again Sara

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 2:04:00 PM

Richard, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 3:35:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 9/1/2013 8:17:00 AM

Oh....has it all....love it Richard...congratulations

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Donna

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/31/2013 10:50:00 PM

Congrats, Rick... Interesting acrostic...Soup Mail..when you've got a minute...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2013 5:52:00 PM

I like the down to earth feeling of this one, Richard, and YES, I sure can use some bread too. hahaha. Congrats!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/1/2013 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/25/2013 11:42:00 PM

NICE 1 WAITIN 4 MOR

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/26/2013 6:49:00 AM

Thanks Vinayak

Allen Danie

Date: 8/25/2013 11:33:00 PM

Nice one....hope to see more :) A~D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 11:34:00 PM

Thanks Allen

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/25/2013 6:13:00 PM

love this acrostic...good luck in the contest my friend :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 9:29:00 PM

Thanks Sandra

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/25/2013 3:05:00 PM

This is great! Hugs

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/25/2013 11:13:00 AM

I was totally unfamiliar with this form until I read your poem, Richard. I'm happy that I am being exposed to so many different styles. "Half-baked" would have been an awesome title. Anyways, good job, my friend! :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/25/2013 10:45:00 AM

Good luck, Richard....We can use more "bread" around here....

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/25/2013 8:11:00 AM

Are you sure, Rick, lol? Glad you are having fun writing it. So enjoyed! A fun poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Toquyen

Monterey Sirak

Date: 8/25/2013 6:53:00 AM

Great poem. Haven't heard cash referred to as 'bread' for quite a while. Takes me back.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 7:23:00 AM

Ha ha!

Chris Boskovski

Date: 8/25/2013 12:04:00 AM

Clever write and great poem! Takes the notion of the struggling artist looking for a break! I love it, reminds me of myself and my endless debts to my fellow friends! lol Great write Richard! from your fellow poet - Christopher :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Christophe

Red Fiery

Date: 8/24/2013 11:18:00 PM

Clever write. .I liked this too...very different from other works :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Red!