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All of my tokens consumed in the ride, Mounted on my stallion, a popinjay of lively colors, Sunlight glistens, inviting me to bask in its rays, As I cling to the cool steel like embracing a lover. Each moment the spectators pass me, Or am I the passerby – a casual acquaintance, Futile analysis just awakens cerebral juices, As I steal a piece of them to carry along my journey. Mirrors, once pulsating with endless laughter, Cast a dim reflection of a stranger hauntingly familiar, Something in the gaze, the turn of the lips, Reminders of a childhood friend buried in mind's recesses. I feel the collapse of my spirit as the ride's end nears, Just a small moment to reason with the Master Engineer, “Slow the rotations, curse the darkness that sends me homeward, I swear I'll be prudent – just one more token...maybe two...."

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Date: 3/10/2016 12:25:00 AM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/5/2015 2:11:00 AM
Beth :) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/3/2010 1:03:00 PM
Great poem - I've always had a thought to write a poem about a carousel but could never find the right words...loved you you expressed it. - All the best, Karen
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Date: 7/1/2010 1:10:00 PM
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:15:00 AM
Great write that was well deserved feature this week..Congratulations....Sara
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Beth. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:09:00 AM
There is a lot of the child in this poem, and I love the child in everyone. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:55:00 AM
Nice imagery - many congrats on your featuret this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/25/2010 3:25:00 PM
The flow of this poem is excellent. I like how the title flows throughout the piece. This line is right on point, “Slow the rotations, curse the darkness that sends me homeward." Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/24/2010 12:24:00 PM
Loved your poem, Beth...an original writing.Welcome to Poetry Soup! Emily
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:28:00 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Beth. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:52:00 AM
Good Day 2 you Beth: Wonderful poem!!! It reminds me of the many times that I rode a carousel in hopes of getting the brass ring. This poem also (in my opinion) has a little bit of a spiritual theme to it. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:32:00 PM
"all my tokens consumed in a ride", that was very clever to write,,, very unique,,, tokens of life lol riding and a want to keep inserting those coins,, loved it!!!...P.D.
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