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Arjn A challenge to be embraced Reading instructions not natural for this man Jostling with my mind grasping for ideas Notes written hoping to discover a song Tdwk Tapping my foot searching for the rhythm Dancing through waves of confusion Waiting for inspiration to take my hand Kissing me softly as we glide accross the page 5pep 5 minutes a snippet of time Pulsating words bouncing along Escaping released from my mind Paper dipped pen sings its own song I took the captchas that came four in a row attempting to weave a coherent piece, hopefully this works.

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Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/19/2013 8:25:00 PM

Okay, this is a cool piece. I really liked it; you have some awesome verses. I glided and floated right along with it. "Dancing through waves of confusion"- when I am jealous that I did not pen that line, I know it's good. Awesome read! :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/31/2013 6:30:00 AM

I'd say it works. I am impressed! Well done. I absolutely love the last line. Sometimes it feels like the poems are writing themselves and I am only holding the pen, just along for the ride

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 6:40:00 AM

Can totally relate. For me that is the fun in it. Something where something did not previously exist.

Heather Ober

Date: 7/30/2013 5:43:00 AM

Wow, I am so impressed by how well you made those work!! That last line is SO cool. Well done, my friend!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2013 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Heather you are very kind ans sweet.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/29/2013 10:12:00 AM

Richard..........WOW! :) I'm SO impressed!!!!! You are one of the first ever to get into my favorite poet file....I daily see reasons why! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/30/2013 2:07:00 PM

OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOW! OH WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :) :) :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2013 7:37:00 AM

Aww thanks Eileen, as you know you are at the top of my favorites list.

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/29/2013 8:36:00 AM

Nicely done!!! You had fun with this, I can tell. "Paper dipped pen sings its own song", be sure to change "it's" to "its". :) Either way, that last line made me smile.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Drake, sometimes the auto correct gets me.

Donna Jones

Date: 7/29/2013 7:55:00 AM

Good morning Richard....really liked these......

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/29/2013 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Donna