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Calm Down Or Create More Chaos

Why do you always scream and yell Putting everyone through hell That crosses your path of shame Always taking on the blame That you dish out when you feel Life is getting way to real And you can't cope with painful days So you find extreme bad ways To release the built up pressure But it doesn't make it lesser Your just causing hurt and anguish Which won't disappear or vanquish Until help is being sought With these tensions being fought That are building more and more Take a breath, stop, and be sure To calm down and be relaxed Don't let feelings attack And take over way too long Find a peaceful inner song That will bring you to a place Of happiness that will grace Your days with joy. love, and cheer Instead of all the bad despair That others have always seen Now you can start fresh and clean Showing a new side of you That will spread a lifetime through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/19/2014 3:56:00 PM
Very good, and thought-provoking.Nice flow, nice imagery..
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Date: 1/19/2014 10:42:00 AM
gosh, who is this person you write about, robin? Or are you writing to all those who exhibit these flaws? In any event, I hope they wake up and smell the coffee!!! the title of this one is great too!!!
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:39:00 PM
NICE JOB ENJOYED IT ALSO MY FRIEND. CHERI
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Date: 1/18/2014 5:34:00 PM
Wonderful advice to help those who are hurting one way or another..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/18/2014 5:25:00 PM
Hi Robin, Aren't boisterous people annoying? Nice write.
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:45:00 PM
Wow. Really felt the raw emotion of this piece, Sweet Pea. I, like the others, have also known people like this. Great job conveying these unfortunate character faults and defects <3 ~Chan
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:23:00 AM
I too know many people like this, Awesome write.
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Date: 1/17/2014 9:08:00 PM
I know so many people like this. Your words nailed it. Awesome.
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