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By All of This - Ah, Wanton Bliss

That passion’s night, to make me sigh, my love seized several beams from sky and shaped a ring of moonstone bright. To make me sigh that passion’s night. My darling beau, to make me smile, then star-shine stole so he could style a necklace rare with diamond’s glow. To see me smile, my darling beau. Dear Valentine, to dazzle me, took whitest pearls from twilight’s sea, with starry strand to intertwine. To dazzle me, dear Valentine. My true love wooed with more than these, not only sight, but ear to please! Two birds he brought that softly cooed. With more than these, my true love wooed. With rose bouquet, with kisses sweet, he made my heart then faster beat. Artisan of romantic play - with kisses sweet, with rose bouquet. By all of this, in motion set was what I’d never known as yet. It burst, then flowed. . . Ah, wanton bliss, in motion set by all of this! (BTW, this is pure imagination, people!!! So don't be jealous!! hahaha This is a form called Swap Quatrain, PD. Happy Valentine's Day to you!!) For the Get your Valentine's Day poem in... any Valentine's poem will do.. (new or old) Poetry Contest of Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 10/27/2013 12:55:00 PM
Wow, what a beautiful poem and style. Like something right out of the classics. Excellent write!
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Date: 3/27/2013 11:29:00 AM
Came back to read this one again....I just LOVE it!!
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Date: 3/1/2013 10:31:00 AM
A great write on this one. love phyl
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:27:00 PM
lovely write - and a new form!
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Date: 2/18/2013 11:49:00 PM
Hmm!lovely and awesome piece,great friend.Congratulations on your superb win.A classical poem from a classic lady.keep flying and thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:43:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. Well earned win. xxxRalph
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Date: 2/17/2013 3:00:00 PM
Of rapture red with rosy glow. Your valentines day because of your beau. Hope this was reminicent of your day Andrea. :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2013 3:49:00 PM
nope it wasn't hahaha. but I enjoyed having the grandkids over for valentines night.
Date: 2/17/2013 2:19:00 PM
Imaginary or not it was stunning. Congratulations
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Date: 2/17/2013 10:16:00 AM
I love this Andrea; I know it will be a winner. I have not posted one, because it is hard for me to write about love. I have one, but not about love. Do you think it will work? Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/17/2013 4:46:00 AM
- A beautiful Valentines poem, it had to win Andrea! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - Have a beautiful Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:10:00 AM
congratulation Andrea, this is amazing...
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:40:00 PM
Super wow! Congratulations my dear friend Andrea for your very lovely and sweet poem and super win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2013 6:36:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea... wonderful write
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:44:00 PM
Everything about this is wonderful, Andrea...its something you could read for years and love even more...just great.
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:20:00 PM
I like your imagination, Andrea! Actually, I really like your way with words. This is beautiful and flowing. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:17:00 PM
Another excellent poem and win. I enjoyed reading this romantic poem again.
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:46:00 PM
Oh you kidder! LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:00:00 PM
!! Congratulations on your very fine win, Andrea!
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Date: 2/16/2013 2:10:00 PM
Hola Andrea, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) with your lovely and wonderful poem. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2013 1:44:00 PM
Only you would enter such a complex form and make it work so beautifully!! Congrats!!
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Date: 2/16/2013 7:27:00 AM
Fantastic poem painted the valentine Day more colorful with nice depiction. Thanks for your comment, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/15/2013 9:21:00 PM
I like believing it's real...it's so romantic and creative..Thanks for your comments..Love the part about the birds! xx Holly Moore
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Date: 2/15/2013 8:03:00 PM
I love the poem Andrea, it has a nice flow...I also noticed the nice happy valentine cheer for me, thanks a lot....ha ha..this reminds me, to check on my contest.. .xox~PD
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Date: 2/15/2013 5:57:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2013 5:41:00 PM
Ha, you shouldn't spoil the knowledge, Andrea. I was enjoying it. It's so juicy, lol! Anyhow, great one!
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