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But a Dream

A surprise to me Your heart full of love and joy Magnificent dream

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David Rombo

Date: 12/12/2011 9:51:00 AM

stunning. you poetry literally talks. :) .Day-vo.

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2011 12:58:00 PM

No better dream than love and happiness Carol :)

Jessica K

Date: 12/7/2011 6:07:00 AM

Simple, yet so beautiful! Amazing job, Carol!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/6/2011 11:11:00 PM

A senryu has its limitations for descriptiveness due to its obvious restrictions. However, you have done a marvelous job here with your composing.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 9:17:00 PM

If only it were in real life. A well written senryu power packed with emotion...thanks for always sharing your thots on my poetry, Carol. I hope your Thanksgiving was great and the Holidays will be even more spectacular. .....I passed up that farm... a lot of work that I am not motivated to do right now. ;( Love, Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/6/2011 4:13:00 PM

ONE WE ALL HOPE TO FIND..oopsie..Happy Holy Days!! Light & Love

Don Johnson

Date: 12/6/2011 3:43:00 PM

and that is what we always need, a lover or magnificent steed, and life goes on once more...

David Williams

Date: 12/6/2011 1:27:00 PM

Carol magnificent write..David

M.I.A .

Date: 12/5/2011 8:08:00 PM

'Magnificent dream', truly you are!

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 12/5/2011 2:34:00 PM

Dear Carol, Many thanks for your warm welcome. I know nothing about poetry - never had a lesson - I just write it because God told me to. Thanks for your poetry - it's a blessing. All the best with your poetry. Merry Christmas & God bless! Maureen PS. My second book is about to be published.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/5/2011 11:57:00 AM

Yes indeed. A magnificent dream. Nice job here Carol. Love it. God Bless, JB

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/5/2011 7:07:00 AM

aw - sounds to me like unrequited love :( it sucks when we love someone and they don't love us back. sometimes it is only a dream to be loved. great senryu carol :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/4/2011 9:37:00 PM

Could not agree with you more Carol.. Love this, hope the week ahead will be a blessed one ;) love Wilma

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 12/3/2011 11:43:00 PM

This real good, i luv it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2011 9:37:00 PM

Love it Carol... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your Senryu~;-) always,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2011 4:30:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..If we could all have dreams like that and that they would come true..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like winning material..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/2/2011 3:43:00 PM

wonderful when it happens! Light & Love

Clay Robbins

Date: 12/2/2011 3:02:00 PM

How delightfully warm and sweet. I hope to wake from a sleep soon with similar words spilling forth. It was nice to have you comment on my poetry herein; Carol, you have a kind soul.

Clay Robbins

Date: 12/2/2011 3:02:00 PM

How delightfully warm and sweet. I hope to wake from a sleep soon with similar words spilling forth. It was nice to have you comment on my poetry herein; Carol, you have a kind soul.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/2/2011 2:34:00 PM

* dream, I meant, LOL

Jack Horne

Date: 12/2/2011 2:32:00 PM

Very sweet surprise indeed, Carol. Many congrats to you too, my friend, and thanks - I enjoyed your contest, as always : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 11:54:00 AM

now THat is one magnificent dream!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/2/2011 11:45:00 AM

Very upbeat poem! Thank you for your kind words and best of the season to you and yours! Yours Matthew Anish

Broken Butterfly

Date: 12/2/2011 9:12:00 AM

A beautiful dream that hopefully is reality too. Thank you Carol for my first place in your Let Down Contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/2/2011 9:10:00 AM

What a wonderful write Carol. I love the dramatic nature of the human nature. Dreaming of love and joy but wishing it was real and true. I am immersed within your poem! Thank you for sharing it with all of us! Excellent Work!!